Rainbow, after getting to know him better at the Gala and The Rainbow Falls, has quite the crush on Soarin. With the Wonderbolts in Ponyville for a celebration, tonight is going to be her best chance at asking him out. As long as she doesn't blow it.
7009265 Thanks for the critique! I tried to scale back a little on caps and stuff in the latest chapter. I'll keep this in mind for anything I write in the future.
70142667019068 If you do want to see something else for this story (and you have a good idea for what should happen), I'd say drop it off into the Big Box-o'-Requests and hope it gets chosen. Plus, I'm going to be doing something for when I hit 100 followers that could very well lead to another chapter to this story...
And too another amazing writer, I swear FimFiction is a great place to let the great imaginations go free. This was very well written, especially the first person aspect of it. Only thing I have to say is, "Keep up the astounding work, your going somewhere!"
A lovely ending. Clop aside, you are a very talented writer. I really want to see more. Where do I put request Again?
... well damn, heck of a time for their first. Pushing aside that, this was pretty good, I'll have to read more of your stories :)
7009265 Thanks for the critique! I tried to scale back a little on caps and stuff in the latest chapter. I'll keep this in mind for anything I write in the future.
7012017 Right into the ol' Big Box-o'-Requests.
7012395 Thanks! If you don't find anything interesting in my current stories, be sure to drop an idea into the Big Box-o'-Requests!
Awwwwwwwwww
7012428 which I already did, thank you very much :D
bonus chapter ''the next morning'' please
Just had to comment, I find it hysterical that I gave this a thumbs up, and it hit 69
Really well written, and I hope to see this continued!
7014266 7019068 If you do want to see something else for this story (and you have a good idea for what should happen), I'd say drop it off into the Big Box-o'-Requests and hope it gets chosen. Plus, I'm going to be doing something for when I hit 100 followers that could very well lead to another chapter to this story...
And too another amazing writer, I swear FimFiction is a great place to let the great imaginations go free. This was very well written, especially the first person aspect of it. Only thing I have to say is, "Keep up the astounding work, your going somewhere!"
This is honestly my favorite clopfic