On the other side of the ocean, lies a long forgotten land. Quietly, they watched the other lands, biding their time. When the time is right, they will reveal themselves. On one hand is an olive branch. On the other, is a sword.
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Hi Back Kiddo, I'm Dad!
Question: could you introduce dwarves, halflings and elves too? Because only humans is kinda cliché.
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Brief cameos of sub-species Humans later. At least one of them is discreet since I’m borrowing two characters from another author’s fic over at Fanfiction.net
No offense, but I don’t really feel any connection with these guys. The for me is alright, but the characters, not so much.
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Damn, I wanted the ponies to freak out when they saw magic-resistant dorfs carrying power armor and magic-toting elves spamming magic missiles. Halflings would simply turn them into geldings.
Ok there are missing words throughout this chapter they crop up here and there with only the occasional one that you must guess on.
Nice to be seeing more of Max’s past but I feel like I am more drawn to the invasion and how the Equestrians are going to be dealing with all their missing vessels and the invasion that is going on.
This isnt danger close if its 100 meters. Typically danger close is 600 meters away from friendly pos. But under that would be considered a Broken Arrow Situation in which friendly forces are too intermixed or close to hostile forces and are in threat of being overrun. Broken Arrow is a destination that is used as last resort. Hope that helps
Also i really like the COD WAW Refrences
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Thank you, but I thought it would be danger close since it’s the 9K720 Iskander and it’s three of them so they’ll be a little spread out.
But yeah, I’ll change that scene when I have time.
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Yeah it’s a reoccurring problem I’ve had for a very long time. I think faster than I can write or type and I end up either misspelling or entirely miss a word from the sentence.
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Thanks!
That’s some great battle scenes d(^_^o)
Awesom!
Um about that 1st Winged Hussars cavalery...
If you wanted to say "Kill first, count later" it should be "Najpierw zabij, potem policz" appreciate the touch though
titanic sperm whale? who side that thing on?
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Humans I guess