On the other side of the ocean, lies a long forgotten land. Quietly, they watched the other lands, biding their time. When the time is right, they will reveal themselves. On one hand is an olive branch. On the other, is a sword.
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I think they are selling the Equestrians a little short here. I feel that there is a very good reason that ship was missing weapons and it could have been sent as a pawn. Good chapter now how will e ponies react?
6937595 Maybe
When I looked at the first pic I thought,
not sure whether or not to be happy it's not.
My reason is that i'm stuck thinking of the wolfenstein naizs.
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6937622 I really hope this story the humans win
6937627 I'll help you with that. Try thinking of them WITHOUT the Swastika.
The amount of pictures in place of description really throws me off.
Impel Down. One Piece reference?
6937627 I'm stuck with the Nazi's from Hellsing Ultimate.
6937746 Yeah, I love reading the One Piece comics.
6937740 Just to let you know, I'm pretty terrible when it comes to describing.
6937762 Fucking lad.
6937766
You really should practice on it then. Photos in place in place of description is very distracting and will cause a lot of people to stop reading.
Visualize what you want then try to describe it, see how you do.
6937740 Agreed.
6937622 As to your taste in music, I prefer Rebirth by Bone-Thugs N Harmony. Fitting? I like to think so!
6937766 I would recommend describing them in the story then putting the pictures of whatever in the authors note or end note. Without description it does not allow the reader to get hooked and interested in the story.
6937747 I love those guys, but they bad at winning the war. You know, there job.
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6937821 Yeah, I'll try that next chapter. Ironic I'm better at describing the Equestrians than the Humans.
shouldn't the emperor exhaust diplomatic solutions prior to military intervention?
6939044 They are driven by vengeance.
6939158 still though
6939395
Instead of thinking about it from the modern diplomatic standard, use the standards proposed by Halo instead. The humans were pushed back in a genocidal war, and were thought to be extinct. Wouldn't the humans take advantage of that to take down those who sought them to be destroyed, rather then try to make peace with an enemy that has been proven to not negotiate under any circumstances in the past?
6942533 alrighty
im loving this story :)
shit
I like it.
Its one of the More Decent stories i have read on this website.
7016314 Thanks
7016318 Your Welcome.
That's Nightingale armor.
I love it.
Great story by the way, one of the best Human vs. Pony stories I've read.
Welp, for the emperor of mankind. CHARGE!
Nice One Piece reference there
Good, good, very good....
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I think this is the first time I have ever seen someone talk about Bone Thugs on this site. You just earned all of my respect.
Is this... Strangereal?
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I may have been inspired by Ace Combat when I created Belka and Yuktobania.
Ah. A fellow One Piece fan.
Insta-like.
Purge the Xenos.
Is it weird that I was Listening to Sanctified with Dynamite by Powerwolf while reading this?
Is Miyagi a reference to the kung fu spin-off of Karate Kid
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I honestly just found a random Japanese last name, and then combined it with the real life Admiral Jisaburo Ozawa.
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First chapters are actually pretty bad since I was new to writing.
So the Equestrians invaded the human colonies, believing it was their main homeland... that is the dumbest thing to have happened, considering they attacked without even questioning how they got there is just dumb. I want to know why they enslaved the humans in the first place or attacked them in the first place?
To many crowns in one paragraph
Terra Invicta O7
May the United Terran Empire prevail!
... I'm sorry, but nightingale armor from the elderscrolls 5 skyrim, and an AR-7... why what how. A midevil esque leather STEALTH armor and a modern firearm. Like I get they have Battleships and stuff so the guns check out but the nightingale armor... to be fair it looks good, it just doesn't fit the theme at all.
... I'm calling bullshit
AGREED DROP EM SARGE ILL PRIME THE NAPALM, TIME FOR SOME HOLY FIRE.
... "they control the weather" what the fuck does that have to do with anything, most modern payloads are environmentally sealed, and you can't bullshit me by saying "oh but this takes place before modern technology advanced to that level" because you told me the LEATHER FUCKING ARMOR is now magicly fucking "bulletproof". If you can do that you can damn well make a munitions payload environmentally sealed or at the very least resistant. And yes even if lighting struck the payload it would still work as intended.
Not to mention the fact they would have to manually calculate the trajectory of the bomb (IN REAL TIME) get above it with a lightning cloud and then hope to God the lightning actually conducted to the payload while it's falling almost imperceptibly fast, and even than unless your using a highly electronic reliant payload the lightning won't do shit because the payload is mechanical not electronic unless your using an h bomb or other fission weaponry you won't even encounter this problem, even If you were using an H bomb or the like they are sealed against any Hazzard like lightning regardless, and that's even entertaining the highly unlikely possibility the ponies could even hit it let alone If the bolt would conduct just right or if they could even get into a position where striking would be plausible.
AND THATS ASSUMING THEY DONT GET HIT BY ANOTHET BOMB IN THE PROCESS.
Sooo I'm calling ultimate bullshit on that one my man.
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Agreed
11421168
Bulshit to what?