It's not easy finding yourself in a world you weren't made for. But nothing truly worthwhile is easy, a lesson Spike knows all too well. Tags to be added as necessary.
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So... He's been there for two years aready? Wow... That's some leap in the story's time... And there's absolutely nothing happening with HIS pony Twilight, Celestia, etc. ...
Maybe consider moving "She wasn't upset..." and "She was livid" next to each other to get the effect a bit more obvious. Or maybe move She was livid onto another line? Something to hammer the effect home a little more, I get what you're doing, but I had to read it a couple times.
Did he ever have that for villains? I get he might have that for Twilight but...
And it's almost time for Equestria Girls? I'm excited!
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Well, while I admit the "it's already been two years" was a little loosely conveyed, it is the past for Spike's Twilight. So until the Twilight that's not Spike's goes through the portal...
6954693 assuming its even the same universe, just with him being sent earlier in time... Which doesnt seem right if he came there because the portal saw him as a corrupt being of sorts... Then again, I'm not the author, so I have no idea what's going to happen later on
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Maybe... Twilight was ruminating on how maybe she had a time-travel resistant memory, though, so it seems like it's one... er... multiverse.
Fucking time holes man! Can't wait for the big "mind fucking climax", Spike's, going to give her.
On another note, why are most if not all of, Twilight's, biggest enemies turned friends "unicorn mares"?!
Seriously! Chick just can't be friends.
6954562 Time's a little weird when you look at Equestria Girls. For one thing, just Luna and Celestia.
For another, let's look at Sunset Shimmer herself. All media sources place her as starting in High School, but those same sources depict Twilight Sparkle in the background as a young filly. So somewhere in there a decade came and went for the land of Equestria while ~two years occurred in Canterlot High.
Finally, I'm trying to keep the story moving and not get caught in the mountains and mountains of minutia I could include as Spike explores the human world. That could make up a whole second story.
6954602 Here's a thought for you, and you can tell me whether I'm joking or not. This relates to Spike and the subservient bit.
Spike has a weakness for angry unicorn mares.
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I'm allowed to tell you?
Well... I do think you're joking.
But might not be? I can see it... (even though I would say there's nothing in the show that actually indicates he has a thing for angry mares...) but I wouldn't like it. I'd more chalk it up to "Spike thought his spinelessness and caving when someone gets stern with him was over, but instead it wasn't."