It's not easy finding yourself in a world you weren't made for. But nothing truly worthwhile is easy, a lesson Spike knows all too well. Tags to be added as necessary.
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This passage from quote to quote is really confusing:
Basically every line you have one person talking and the other reacting. It's... really confusing.
Or... are they doing it? The more I read the more I realize they're both saying that human's are gross, so I had assumed that Twilight was lecturing Spike but... hm. I am still having a hard time telling. That last line, for example, has both Twilight and Spike in it, so it's unclear who's speaking just on the lines.
Yyyyeah. His hyper eagerness to please would be more obvious when he's not a significant class of age younger and a different species that people might just be more comfortable thinking of as a pet, rather than a threat.
I'd be interested in seeing this, rather than just being told it, though.
6914057 Yeah, I can see that. I'll put up an edited, clearer version tomorrow while I'm working on the next chapter.
And so the story gently seagued into "The sound of music".
When do we get to the singing nuns?