Rudolph the red-nosed reindeer was out with Santa on Christmas Eve when he suddenly found himself in the land of Equestria. It's not often a deer visits Ponyville, and some folks want to experience the exotic new cuisine in more ways than one...
Thumbed down because it started off in areas I liked but slowly made me feel worse about reading it and having to force myself along, and just generally felt unpleasant. As a suggestion, I'd say giving a list of kinks at the beginning of the chapter. It's well written, hot when it appeals to me but I felt suckered into something. Just blame me rather than yourself though, I just needed to say something to acquire closeure.b-i.forbesimg.com/theapothecary/files/2014/01/bailout_imminent1.png
I wouldn't count his encounter with Rarity as sex since he was basically on the receiving end of everything (I assume so since I just skipped that whole garbage section.) Story actually started good and then the last 3 chapters raped this story and left it for dead in a ditch. Would have been nice to have had disclaimers about what was in each chapter. Just skipped the entire clop (garbage shit) scene for this and Rarity's chapter. This story now gets 20 downvotes from me.
Wow. The people commenting here need to be less entitled.
First off, the description said that there would be M/M from the very beginning. Second, it wasn't even something extreme, like scat. It was really vanilla gay sex, nothing disturbing about it. I'm sorry that the story contained things that you don't like. Have you tried reading something else instead?
These negative comments on Christmas are making me quite sad. This is one of the few stories that manages to describe extremely kinky and casual sex while still being heartwarming. What's not to love about that? The fact that a new chapter has been released every day leading up to Christmas just made it even more enjoyable to read during the holiday. Rudolph fits right in with the ponies, so I'm glad someone did this, though I'd have read it if it wasn't clop also. There's probably a better story in this that could be a sequel of sorts, but for what was accomplished here in this tight schedule it was wonderful.
6764810 If you don't like something in the chapter, then don't read it. News flash, you're probably not going to be missing any important story elements from the hardcore sex scenes. as John Doe noted, the MxMxF tag has been there since the beginning.
6764762 6764533 That would just spoil the contents of the chapter for people who might like to be surprised by what they read. The most important tags always go in the description, but the lesser kinks don't otherwise I'd just be spelling out the whole story in the description. If you come across a kink you don't like, then skip over it. The whole story's not filled with them.
6765560 6765579 Thank you very much for your kind words, and I hope you enjoy the last chapter.
i'm only disappointed rudy missed being the middle of the sandwich, or twilight in the middle....this definitely needs some breakfast sex when they wake up! (the best sex of course)
Geesh you don't have to read any tags if you don't like penis in boy butt, twlight was going on and on about it and rudy was hesitant enough about going for it, so many chances for those getting soft to get out and go back to pinky! whiners.
i really wanted that thick stallion penis back in that reindeer butt some more before they passed out (falling asleep with it in, esp with rudy in twilight too woulda been super!). Good stuff! more please...
I haven't even read the damn story and I already getting a red flags to run
Thumbed down because it started off in areas I liked but slowly made me feel worse about reading it and having to force myself along, and just generally felt unpleasant. As a suggestion, I'd say giving a list of kinks at the beginning of the chapter. It's well written, hot when it appeals to me but I felt suckered into something. Just blame me rather than yourself though, I just needed to say something to acquire closeure.b-i.forbesimg.com/theapothecary/files/2014/01/bailout_imminent1.png
I wouldn't count his encounter with Rarity as sex since he was basically on the receiving end of everything (I assume so since I just skipped that whole garbage section.) Story actually started good and then the last 3 chapters raped this story and left it for dead in a ditch. Would have been nice to have had disclaimers about what was in each chapter. Just skipped the entire clop (garbage shit) scene for this and Rarity's chapter. This story now gets 20 downvotes from me.
Alright, this takes the cake for least enjoyable chapter for me. Rarity's was hard enough for me, but I just can't do M/M sex
Honestly, Fluttershy's was the hottest for me.
Sorry, I had to vent. Excuse me while I find some brain bleach.
You did a great job man! Really enjoyed reading this!
Wow. The people commenting here need to be less entitled.
First off, the description said that there would be M/M from the very beginning. Second, it wasn't even something extreme, like scat. It was really vanilla gay sex, nothing disturbing about it. I'm sorry that the story contained things that you don't like. Have you tried reading something else instead?
These negative comments on Christmas are making me quite sad. This is one of the few stories that manages to describe extremely kinky and casual sex while still being heartwarming. What's not to love about that? The fact that a new chapter has been released every day leading up to Christmas just made it even more enjoyable to read during the holiday. Rudolph fits right in with the ponies, so I'm glad someone did this, though I'd have read it if it wasn't clop also. There's probably a better story in this that could be a sequel of sorts, but for what was accomplished here in this tight schedule it was wonderful.
It was okay. The beginning was the best.
The chapter was very sexy.
6764810 If you don't like something in the chapter, then don't read it. News flash, you're probably not going to be missing any important story elements from the hardcore sex scenes. as John Doe noted, the MxMxF tag has been there since the beginning.
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6764533 That would just spoil the contents of the chapter for people who might like to be surprised by what they read. The most important tags always go in the description, but the lesser kinks don't otherwise I'd just be spelling out the whole story in the description. If you come across a kink you don't like, then skip over it. The whole story's not filled with them.
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6765579 Thank you very much for your kind words, and I hope you enjoy the last chapter.
What with all the complaints? The description is quite clear and if you dislike pegging or M/M then why are you reading this?
Hell at least Raity's treatment didn't send Rudy over the edge and go full blown stereotypical gay.
i feel conflicted
i dont like MxM it makes my dick soft
but that wasent bad so im sittin here with half a boner goin "ER..."
Did you make that up ?
I don't know about this I got nothing against gay people but I can't read it other than that good stuff
i'm only disappointed rudy missed being the middle of the sandwich, or twilight in the middle....this definitely needs some breakfast sex when they wake up! (the best sex of course)
Geesh you don't have to read any tags if you don't like penis in boy butt, twlight was going on and on about it and rudy was hesitant enough about going for it, so many chances for those getting soft to get out and go back to pinky! whiners.
i really wanted that thick stallion penis back in that reindeer butt some more before they passed out (falling asleep with it in, esp with rudy in twilight too woulda been super!). Good stuff! more please...