Shining cried out in pain, pulling at his restraints.
Why is his pain so exaggerated? Sure, it's uncomfortable for a while if you don't cum, like an annoying cramp, but it's not like a sudden pain that causes you to cry out.
7223966 I guess, personally, someone being in more or less pain then they should be brings me out of story. It's not really a huge compliant, though. I still enjoy the story.
Great chapter.
This reminds me of another piece of crack clop fiction involving a genderbent pinkie pie...
God damn Cadence... maybe Twilight should have left your ungrateful ass in the crystal caves.
wow
more
box again
7177827 That bothered me too. Does Cadence have some sort of ulterior motive by inviting Trixie?
7179014 of course she has! Do you think the Princess of Love would forget the one responsible for her great love life?
Not a shabby trick, after all! Certainly unexpected, that's for sure!
Yeeeeaaas trixie is finally gonna get to have sex with them once again
7200844 I did not think anyone would get that reference. You sir, win a mustache.
Why is his pain so exaggerated? Sure, it's uncomfortable for a while if you don't cum, like an annoying cramp, but it's not like a sudden pain that causes you to cry out.
7222924 Dramatic effect? An 'annoying cramp' wouldn't force Twilight to hastily spring into action in the heat of the moment.
7223966 I guess, personally, someone being in more or less pain then they should be brings me out of story. It's not really a huge compliant, though. I still enjoy the story.
And then trixie died a horrible, horrible death.
Holy shit that was hilarious