Sunset Shimmer has a good life with good friends. She just doesn't quite manage to notice everything she should... Like her friends checking her out...
I can honestly say that I would expect Twilight to be fully informed on all the physical methodology, biological consequences and sociological research done on all aspects of human sexuality. That is it, though; it would all be theory and dry academic texts. Actually trying to have a relationship would be more terrifying to her than if Sunset invited her to join her on a trip through the portal to her alien home-world!
and having been pulled from her storm watching Sunset followed.
and having been pulled from her storm watching, Sunset followed.
the photos that she'd so recently suck there.
the photos that she'd so recently stuck there.
clothes Rarity 'just happened to have' the bell for class rang,
clothes Rarity 'just happened to have'. The bell for class rang,
“Um sure Fluttershy,” “Whoa, hold up there Sparkle, “Relax Twilight, your secret if you think it's okay Twilight,” smiled Sunset, “Hey Twilight... There's something
When someone is addressed by name, sepaate it on both sides with a comma unless there's other punctuation there. “Um sure, Fluttershy,” “Whoa, hold up there, Sparkle, “Relax, Twilight, your secret if you think it's okay, Twilight,” smiled Sunset, “Hey, Twilight... There's something
I can honestly say that I would expect Twilight to be fully informed on all the physical methodology, biological consequences and sociological research done on all aspects of human sexuality. That is it, though; it would all be theory and dry academic texts. Actually trying to have a relationship would be more terrifying to her than if Sunset invited her to join her on a trip through the portal to her alien home-world!
Very promising :D
Hm, good work for your first story. I'm tracking this.
The gods of shipping are happy with such a great offer
But that aside,it's a very promising story for a first time
Unsolicited typo post! Chapter 1.
and having been pulled from her storm watching, Sunset followed.
the photos that she'd so recently stuck there.
clothes Rarity 'just happened to have'. The bell for class rang,
When someone is addressed by name, sepaate it on both sides with a comma unless there's other punctuation there.
“Um sure, Fluttershy,”
“Whoa, hold up there, Sparkle,
“Relax, Twilight, your secret
if you think it's okay, Twilight,” smiled Sunset,
“Hey, Twilight... There's something