I REALLY REALLY HATE that little bastard rabbit.

No, you called it right first time. That is in fact his proper name to every one but Fluttershy. Freaking devil bunny.

Angel belongs in the top 10 biggest jerks in the whole multiverse

I must say that I am really glad that others share my point of view on "Angel."

Yo! Betoran here! I just wanna tell you that I love the story so far, expecting more chapters on a future time

P.S. Just made it to chapter 3 and so far I'm really loving how the story is going.

P.S.S. Shall the pancakes give you strength!

Read till the last uploaded chapter. Well the story as I said is pretty good, and I love a story. Yet the problem-the dislikes- come mainly because it moves too fast an have many parts that are just... pretty simple.

For the story to get better you need to explain their actions more, and their appearances. You have to write more about the surroundings and the like. One part that made me frown is that his brother came back, yet you didn't say if his brother continue being human or was turned to stallion. Then there is the part of how Celestia took his words at heart, because lets face it. You wont believe two kidnappers while one even have an demon's voice just from the merry start. You need to add something more... heart touching, like exchanging memories or just forcing Celestia to go with the flow with your dark powers or something. You have to put more action when the brothers are talking too and did they shout or whisper the words cause they where in a party were they not?

Oh well that is my opinion/criticism of the story so far. Love the story anyway, waiting for next update :D

P.S. Seeing as this is your first story just remember to edit chapters later on when you got better.

6491257 Well I was considering doing that, but I am worried about giving Nick too much power. While his abilities do come from the most powerful book in existence, I wanted to at least try to limit his power set so as to avoid putting him in a god-like position. If I really should, then I might. I just want to see where the story goes. Basically, I have no plan for this story or any of the others that I have.

Are you canceling the story? 3:>

6679151 HECK NO!!! Fact is I've been busy with life getting in the way of me writing.

6688251 ooooooh thank luna. I got scared for a bit haha!

Whooooooah, this story is, like, so original, creative, clever, and funny! Wow!

No. Just... Why do things like this exist? WHY?!?!?!

At least this is mature for no reason. The children have been spared this horror.

Wow this is just bad... I mean for your first fic, you certainly used almost every trope of bad writing in such a way I could swear you were trying to make this bad on purpose. There is no excuse to make such a ridiculously overpowered OC, and even worse, to use it in a Displaced story. I could stop and take time to point out everything wrong with this, but I'm positive it'd be a waste of time and nothing would change, I'll just down vote and be on my way.

7024996 Well do you have any suggestions to make my OC less overpowered? Please do remember that his abilities come from the Necronomicon, which is viewed as an extremely powerful artifact. I would prefer that his powers do retain a good scare factor.

"Luna, I just designed these powers. I never expected to have them forced on me when I was blasted from my universe into this one. Okay?"

you kinda did