There is no safe way to break that bit of news. Not without losing at least one limb to their very justified worry. Just hope they go for your arms. That way you can still move around.
6509284 *Draigo looks down at his four legs and back to his wings* What arms? I've only got arms in my human form and I'm way more comfortable and tanky in my draconic form. Not that I'm afraid of what they'll possibly do or anything... *Draigo readies himself for battle and then promptly flees to his favorite hiding spot until he figures out the "safest" way to tell them*
Previous chapters were quite enjoyable, but sadly this chapter is a prime example of a crossover gone off the road and down the shitter. A good crossover doesn't require the reader to have read both stories to follow, nor does it contain endless information about the other story. If I wanted that much detail about the other story I would probably be reading it.
I hope that future crossovers will contain just enough information to keep us from wondering what the hell is going on, and be used for story progression purposes.
6509532 Ah, thank you. I agree with you that this latest chapter could've been simplified, but Bronyparasite wanted to see the reactions of the mane six and it ended up becoming what you've read. *sigh*
In the future, crossovers will be simple and will help the story along, at least a little bit. Unless the crossover is in the other author's world, which so far I've liked better. Anyway, I'll remember what you've said for future crossovers.
6509561 if other authors wants you to help them turn their story into a 'complex pile of wat' I don't mind one bit, just don't ruin your story by doing the same.
This whole displaced crossover system has a lot of potential to make awesome stories, but it can easily throw off the readers if not done properly.
There is no safe way to break that bit of news. Not without losing at least one limb to their very justified worry. Just hope they go for your arms. That way you can still move around.
6509284 *Draigo looks down at his four legs and back to his wings* What arms? I've only got arms in my human form and I'm way more comfortable and tanky in my draconic form. Not that I'm afraid of what they'll possibly do or anything... *Draigo readies himself for battle and then promptly flees to his favorite hiding spot until he figures out the "safest" way to tell them*
Previous chapters were quite enjoyable, but sadly this chapter is a prime example of a crossover gone off the road and down the shitter.
A good crossover doesn't require the reader to have read both stories to follow, nor does it contain endless information about the other story. If I wanted that much detail about the other story I would probably be reading it.
I hope that future crossovers will contain just enough information to keep us from wondering what the hell is going on, and be used for story progression purposes.
6509532 Ah, thank you. I agree with you that this latest chapter could've been simplified, but Bronyparasite wanted to see the reactions of the mane six and it ended up becoming what you've read. *sigh*
In the future, crossovers will be simple and will help the story along, at least a little bit. Unless the crossover is in the other author's world, which so far I've liked better. Anyway, I'll remember what you've said for future crossovers.
6509561 if other authors wants you to help them turn their story into a 'complex pile of wat' I don't mind one bit, just don't ruin your story by doing the same.
This whole displaced crossover system has a lot of potential to make awesome stories, but it can easily throw off the readers if not done properly.
Aww, you charmer you...
6513044 Well, I try.
You are more than welcome to summon Draigo again. He needs to test a theory of his and it can only be tested while in another universe.
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