Another chapter time to read

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uhmm nom nom nom My appetite... it hungers... for MOAR

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This one is sharp...

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God dammit I was thinking of that too. Oh, wait let me fix that.

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I really like the build up and again I don't care for the Underworld movies yet I really like this fic...I don't know, maybe it's the inclusion of ponies, but yeah going into this and not knowing about the protagonist character before hand, you do a good a job of explaining Lucian and I doesn't feel like some rushed crappy HIE fic where some "brony" lives out his demented fantasy and Lucian for the most part seem likeable and confident, which are the two most important qualities of a main character.

I'm just happy that this fic didn't start with the fill in the blank HIE generic story plot and for those of you playing at home here it is:

Hi my name is _____(name), I'm a __(age) year old brony, I love to listen to ____(music genre associated with electronica), I hate my life and parents and cry myself to sleep. One day I got ___(way of entering Equestria, usually involves death). Ooh look____(Pony name).....either gets turned into a pony or stays a human and does something to save the world. The End.

Peace Out and for taking the time to read this here's a gif.

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Oh Luna, you are in one hell of a story.

I'm just loving this. Lucian is my upmost favorite character in the Underworld series. I can't wait to see what insane things the lord of the lycans will bring to such a sweet world/

i like this
i shal now go watch underwould rise of the lycans

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It's why I write crossovers rather then the usual HIE type of story (which you described perfectly ), that way there is already a character with a past and personality for me to work with.

664340 Yeah I hate generic HiE stories but I love them if people do it right this is a prime example of one of those fics

as the fluttershy guy above errr or below not sure said. NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM wonderful story!

667712hey boss man i need a hit of pure awsome
the withdrawl starting to kick in

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Understood...I've got 2500 words done and should be done by tonight (this week was final semester submissions for uni so writing time was minimal)

>>norsefire

think about it... through both seasons, we've seen gold and led weapons. nothing silver. and they don't even have guns, so why worry?

I just red that.
I like it.
I think i need to go to bed now...