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Flip a coin, take a chance, it doesn't really matter. We're all living in a house of cards, just waiting for it all to fall.

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Not gonna say I'm a huge fan of the movies but I've seen them gonna give it a try

Have to say I liked it more please

Now this will be a truley interesting crossover, werewolfs in equestria, BRILLIANT!

Quite enjoyed this, :flutterrage: MOAR!

here's the deal...i give you a thumbs up and a favorite...you give me moar Luccien. See how it works?:moustache::moustache:

Also not really a fan of the underworld series, mostly because I had bad nights whenever I saw them, but I'm enjoying the story so far. Also thanks for more ThanexDash.:twilightsmile:

I'm intrigued even though I don't care for the the Underworld series of films in the slightest, but this has the makings for a good fic. So I'll track it and see where it goes.

did any of you guys think "what a dick" when shining armor started talking
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Not really considering the last thing that crashed the wedding tried to stage a hostile take over of the city anD add in the fact that is a creature that doesn't exist in their world...yeah whether he sounds like a douche is arbitrary, he's got a wife, two princesses, family and a city to protect.

655682 .....ehhhh true
but still damn yo

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He did strike me as a tad cold, but hey he did just get married after being mind controlled by Chrysalis and almost losing his actual fiance...After all that I doubt he'd just let another potential threat waltz around.

Edit: Just noticed thewaffler said pretty much the same thing so yeah. :rainbowwild:

655843 again
........ehhhhhhhh true
but still damn yo

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Just so you all know I'm trying to show Shining Armour how I see him personally...good hearted in general but a touch arrogant at times :twilightsmile:

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that's more or less what i got, seemed a bit too...well quick on the draw i guess to me, but I can't say he wouldn't have done that if it actually happened in the show.

655652 i can see why you think that but at the same time I see where Shining is coming from. SO I'm taking the neutral ground because I agree with both of you

Another chapter :yay: time to read

uhmm nom nom nom My appetite... it hungers... for MOAR :flutterrage:

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God dammit I was thinking of that too. Oh, wait let me fix that.

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One, does not simply live eight hundred years and not have an interesting story to tell.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png

I really like the build up and again I don't care for the Underworld movies yet I really like this fic...I don't know, maybe it's the inclusion of ponies, but yeah going into this and not knowing about the protagonist character before hand, you do a good a job of explaining Lucian and I doesn't feel like some rushed crappy HIE fic where some "brony" lives out his demented fantasy and Lucian for the most part seem likeable and confident, which are the two most important qualities of a main character.

I'm just happy that this fic didn't start with the fill in the blank HIE generic story plot and for those of you playing at home here it is:

Hi my name is _____(name), I'm a __(age) year old brony, I love to listen to ____(music genre associated with electronica), I hate my life and parents and cry myself to sleep. One day I got ___(way of entering Equestria, usually involves death). Ooh look____(Pony name).....either gets turned into a pony or stays a human and does something to save the world. The End.

Peace Out and for taking the time to read this here's a gif.

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Oh Luna, you are in one hell of a story. :moustache:

I'm just loving this. Lucian is my upmost favorite character in the Underworld series. I can't wait to see what insane things the lord of the lycans will bring to such a sweet world/

i like this
i shal now go watch underwould rise of the lycans

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It's why I write crossovers rather then the usual HIE type of story (which you described perfectly :rainbowwild: ), that way there is already a character with a past and personality for me to work with.

664340 Yeah I hate generic HiE stories but I love them if people do it right this is a prime example of one of those fics

as the fluttershy guy above errr or below not sure said. NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM:eeyup: wonderful story!

667712hey boss man i need a hit of pure awsome
the withdrawl starting to kick in

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Understood...I've got 2500 words done and should be done by tonight (this week was final semester submissions for uni so writing time was minimal) :applecry:

Axz

not the biggest fan of the movie series but Lucian and Viktor in equestria that i must admit sound very interesting so ill give this a shot:twilightsmile:

this is great
to many thoughts in my head to pin one down.
so in conclusion
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
:derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
:derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

This was a nice bit of filler and setup. I look forward to the hijinks that will ensue in Ponyville, not to mention his reaction to dragons. (Yay Thane! :pinkiehappy: Not gonna lie when I say that getting more ThaneXDash is a very large chunk of why I'm reading this:twilightblush:)

Awww, that was really sweet.

Yay another chapter Time to read

I like this fic even if I don't know a damn thing about the source material, so if you wanna give the lycan a buddy, by all means go on ahead. As for why Lucian can't live in Canterlot, it doesn't quit make sense to me cause he will out live the mane 6 and their decedents a million times over. Plus there is his title of royalty albeit in title only kinda like be king of a country when the country is wiped off the face of the planet.

I think I know where our protagonist is going and it will end with him eating a large animal in the Everfree like a hydra, or manticore. Better yet it should be a quarry eel. Those things are bad ass.

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Lucian will return to Canterlot (he's simply not there at the present because there's no room) and he will be a 'proper' king again as you will see in coming chapters :trixieshiftleft:

713208 i notice a crossover from my red eyed friend

713208 god i feel slow
your the same person who wrote that
also how is that companion story coming along for it
or is this it

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had two ideas for the crossover...this one came out the better. As promised there will be diamond dogs and Silver, and he will play a big part with Lucian in coming chapters as you will see...:moustache:

loosh..... like in the last part of Lelouch?:moustache:

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I guess so...in the movies his name is said as 'Looshian', so I'm just rolling with that ball :derpyderp2:

Wow...I feel sorry for whatever runs into Lucian on that certain night...

Wait...you want to put Raze, the big badass black guy from the first(and third) movie into the plot? Sure, I loved his character in the first (And was kinda sad he wasn't that used in the third) and would love to see what crazyness he could sturr up with his buddy Lucian (Makes me wonder how he will react to all of this...I don't think he will be as cool with all of this as Lucian is).

Comment posted by norsefire deleted Oct 11th, 2013

Dude, cool. Also, 'loosh'?
And no I don't think you should put any other human...lycan...vampire...in this history, because of that it is cool the way it is, and the simple thought of 2 humans instead of the glory of one would be...less cool. But if you want you could put it, just giving my idea

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Good my friend good can't wait for more
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This good I can finally relate for one he's a werewolf like me and is in love with Luna.
Oh Luna one day you will be mine!:flutterrage:

Cool, you'd think rumors of dragons would be enough to discourage ruffians from coming to Ponyville, now they'll have dragons and a monstrous beast that no one has ever seen before (outside of Ponyville anyway).
Also as someone who really doesn't know much about the underworld universe, is Lucian really this...um, diplomatic and accommodating?

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In the movies he is quite a kind hearted lycan and wants to see lycans become 'a civilised race' like the vampires...so yes most of the time he is soft and diplomatic until someone he cares about is threated (Sonja for example) and then you see his brutal protective/beast side emerge :rainbowdetermined2:

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Ah alright, well I'd say you got both sides down then, especially the protective/beast side.:rainbowwild: Those gangsters never knew what hit them...and then hit them again...

I really like this, Looking forward to more.

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