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Oh snap so the Changelings are even more vampiric now?!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Soarin_dayum.png That's just great.
Actually I thought that was a great way to bring out the changelings, and introduce the existence of some vampires in Equestria...heck maybe a vampire ended up there long before Lucian and actually made the changelings by biting them and passing on the curse, mix that with pony magic to mutate them and boom changelings.
Some errors I caught while reading:
lycan’s apartment nervousness (no need to be nervous about his living conditions)
it was rather quite peaceful; (unneeded word)
now however it’s once proud towers and noble walls now crumbling into ruin (were crumbling)
and knew from just looking could see every stone had been cut (that every)
myself who sort to overthrow my sister (sought)
like we were nothing more animals and humans (than animals,)
joined its dead breather when
Luna hit it a bolt of blue energy (with a bolt)
annoyed that he his cloths
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh I agree with you about "special taste" in blood of infected ones. There can be something familiar for Lucian since he tasted vampire blood often in past.
Edit: And about hot actions LunaxLucien... dunno. You can simply rip it from next chapter and put as a stand alone chapter or story or.... put big motherbucking sign before hot action inside of chapter and singalize end of hot action in same way. Who is going to read it anyway(meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee) do it anyway, who don't want to do this is not going to do it... everyone is happy!
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Dude, read description :D One word. Viktor.
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Probably gonna go with a bonus chapter, easier then splitting a chapter and screwing the flow
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Uh...being at uni means I have very little editing time (plus I didn't want to drag this chapter out for you guys any longer) I'll edit today.
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Who said Viktor was the first vampire to make it to Equestria? Perhaps a vampire died a long time ago and he/she created the changelings...Yeah I know silly idea is silly.
(I did read the desrcription silly)
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No problem, no problem. I was just pointing them out to make the editing easier.
Oh, shit vampire infected changelings and these aren't gonna want to go to high school, sparkle and date mumbling lip biting sociopaths.
Lucian "Crap, it's vampires. I have an idea." He goes to Ponyville elementary school and grabs Diamond Tiara and places her in an over-sized mouse trap.
Diamond Tiara turns to her dad who is the crowd watching from a safe distance."But, Daaaaaaaad."
"Sorry, it for the greater good."
Suddenly hundreds if not thousands of changeling vampires descend onto the trap. screaming lines like, "You're my own personal brand of heroine" or "get on my back spider monkey."
Then Lucian and Raze pop out with an giant can of Raid: fast kill, low irritant bug spray. They all celebrate, 80's metal starts playing in the background.
That's an alternate version of this would play out.
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That scene is now playing on repeat in my brain...
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im gonna stop for a sec on this chapter and i think there might be vampire changelings
oh shit