There are a few places still to remove the line breaks between the dialog and its tags. For example:

“We’ve just started and you’re already making such lewd noises,”
Sunset whispered into Adagios ear.
“I like it.”

to:

“We’ve just started and you’re already making such lewd noises,” Sunset whispered into Adagios ear. “I like it.”

Story-wise, looking forward to seeing where things go from here.

6776997 Alright, I think I got them all.

very good chapter
Thanks for uploading the next part
I can not wait for the next

6784156 Holidays are over now, so updates should be more frequent.

This is relevant to my interests.
I moustache you to continue.

6784672 Ooh a classic, and in mint condition no less.

Hmmm very interesting... Have an upvote and tracking.

6787013 Thank you, I'm glad you like it (I can do better than that.) It fills my heart with... (Nope) It means the world...(apparently I can't)
I'm glad you like it

6787168 Alright, the new chapter is just about finished, and should be up by Sunday.

The revision process is taking longer than I initially projected.
Sorry for the delay but it will be another few days before the new chapter.

Sundagio is starting to grow on me, so it's nice to see more nice work out there!

Not quite enough material and a few too many mechanical issues in the first two chapters for me to give it a like just yet, but it seems like you've got a handle on it. Good luck, I want to see more!

6832930 It is a wonderful ship, and thank you.
Yeah, I plan to go back through and hammer them out a bit once I get my schedule stable. Chapter 2 is a mess.

Hard to believe I've nearly caught up, and so far I like what I've read. Now on to the next chapter.

There both sexual deviants.