6846502 Thanks, glad you liked it. Especially since there is a lot more of it to cum. (Did I really just make that pun.) I should probably be more descriptive with the sensations though. Something for me to try out next time I suppose. Anyway good to hear from you Pan.
6846518 If you need help with descriptions, I can certainly help, Natta. Plus, I usually have my editor on site with me to help. I usually write my stories with her in call to read them over. Oh, and don't worry about the puns. If you don't have fun with your work, things can get pretty boring, y'know?
6846569 It's more a matter of my writing style, I like to hand you a canvas with a sketch on it and let you do the painting. I do plan on being more descriptive next time around though (You know get out of my comfort zone and all that). But if you want to help, team Natta is always recruiting.
For what it's worth, it looks like the main (second) round of edits didn't make into the copy here. That was the pass where I made most of the suggested proofreading fixes. :) It was kind of late last night west coast though.
6856439 whoa, that's one whale of a hug! (get it...because oceans...okay bad pun) And you're whalecome welcome! Also any when the chapter is? Not if have a schedule or estimate somewhere.
The fair eh? A nice little date out to the fair to enjoy the company of one another, I can guess they will enjoy a wonderful cool crisp morning as the sun rises. Followed by a day of fun and games, then they enjoy a dinner with a view of the sun setting in the evening. And dare I say it? Yes Dare, Dare! A little naughty fun in the park as the snow starts to fall around them into the early hours of the night?
Why did my mind run off like that and why did my hands go along for the ride? Who knows and who cares I'm just making a guess.
6869235 Gonna have to keep you waiting on that one. We're going to see how Aria and Sonata are getting along next chapter. I'm having fun with that one too.
6870032 You win, the second one gets more weirdos. Worst I've had was a group of people going through drive thru at a KFC, they where high and drunk. Catering they are drunk all around, and they are either very generous or assholes. Had a drunk woman tip me saying she was giving me three bucks, turns out she gave me three hundred. She calls my boss the next morning and demands that she gets that money back, my boss took the money out of my paycheck. Good business practice they said.
6870085 Oh the looks they must have after you've had your fun, one more question. If a guy has ever bought a vibe of any size for a bit of fun with their lover, have you ever made it look like it was for them by asking if they wanted something to dull the pain?
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6845972 Lol, thank you.
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I loved
Thanks for writing the next chapter
6846409 I may be late (actually I'll most likely be late, but that's beside the point), but I will always update.
Amazing job on the sex, friendo. You definitely know what you are doing!
6846502 Thanks, glad you liked it. Especially since there is a lot more of it to cum. (Did I really just make that pun.) I should probably be more descriptive with the sensations though. Something for me to try out next time I suppose.
Anyway good to hear from you Pan.
6846469 don't worry
6846522 You're right, people like me for the pun loving perv that I am.
6846518
If you need help with descriptions, I can certainly help, Natta. Plus, I usually have my editor on site with me to help. I usually write my stories with her in call to read them over. Oh, and don't worry about the puns. If you don't have fun with your work, things can get pretty boring, y'know?
6846569 It's more a matter of my writing style, I like to hand you a canvas with a sketch on it and let you do the painting. I do plan on being more descriptive next time around though (You know get out of my comfort zone and all that). But if you want to help, team Natta is always recruiting.
6846585
Well, I plan to get an English major, so I can use the experience. If you need help, I'd be happy to. But I won't always be on. Strict house.
Wow, I wasn't expecting a shout-out. Thanks Sunatta
I love this story, and everything that happens in it
6847302 Your welcome.
And thank you.
For what it's worth, it looks like the main (second) round of edits didn't make into the copy here. That was the pass where I made most of the suggested proofreading fixes. :) It was kind of late last night west coast though.
6848536 I'll repost the edited version when I get home.
6846546 yes
6848536 Alright, version 2.0 is up.
6854927 Always brightens my day to know someone enjoys what I'm putting out.
And don't worry this will get finished.
6855034 I second what 6854927 said
6856428 Thank you, HUG
6856439 whoa, that's one whale of a hug! (get it...because oceans...okay bad pun)
And you're whalecome welcome! Also any when the chapter is? Not if have a schedule or estimate somewhere.
6856459 Puns are welcome here.
Next chapter should be fairly soon, sometime next week probably.
6856482 Ah, so you enjoy dabbling in some punography eh?
Also nice, looking forward to it!
6856538 You could say that
I've enjoyed drafting it so far. It's going to be a fun chapter
6856559 Oooh, fun how?
6856685 Sex, lots of it
6856704 Awwww yea
6868623 Glad you're still enjoying it
6868880 Enjoy, 4 was my favorite to write so far.
The fair eh? A nice little date out to the fair to enjoy the company of one another, I can guess they will enjoy a wonderful cool crisp morning as the sun rises. Followed by a day of fun and games, then they enjoy a dinner with a view of the sun setting in the evening. And dare I say it? Yes Dare, Dare! A little naughty fun in the park as the snow starts to fall around them into the early hours of the night?
Why did my mind run off like that and why did my hands go along for the ride? Who knows and who cares I'm just making a guess.
6868806 How can I not enjoy it? Each little word has me hanging by a thread wanting more.
6869071 I can see why.
6869235 Gonna have to keep you waiting on that one. We're going to see how Aria and Sonata are getting along next chapter.
I'm having fun with that one too.
6869263 If I where to make a guess. Take it away Alan Rickman (just 9:20 to 9:36)
6869388 I love Dogma, one of my favs.
Sex and comedy, yeah sounds about right.
6869525 I know one of the best films in my book.
6869656 HUG!!!
6869776 *Reaches out to hug back* Finally someone who doesn't run.
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6869855 I would never run
6869884 HUGS AND LOVE ALL AROUND!
6869887 Exactly how I like my user page/ comment section to be.
6869920 Another of my top favorite films is Clerks, even enjoyed the old animated show that they did.
6869965 Clerks is a goodie too. I've lived that life (albeit a bit less adventurous)
6870003 Caterer of 7 years I know the feeling.
6870005 Grocery clerk for 3, girl behind the counter at the porn store for 2.
6870032 You win, the second one gets more weirdos. Worst I've had was a group of people going through drive thru at a KFC, they where high and drunk. Catering they are drunk all around, and they are either very generous or assholes. Had a drunk woman tip me saying she was giving me three bucks, turns out she gave me three hundred. She calls my boss the next morning and demands that she gets that money back, my boss took the money out of my paycheck. Good business practice they said.
6870054 I live for that awkward vibe of guys too nervous to buy porn/ toys/ condoms etc.
I find the discomfort, comforting.
6870071 Have you ever once messed with them? Throw a joke or two their way to make them sweat?
6870078 It's how I make it through the day to day monotony.
6870085 Oh the looks they must have after you've had your fun, one more question. If a guy has ever bought a vibe of any size for a bit of fun with their lover, have you ever made it look like it was for them by asking if they wanted something to dull the pain?