645016 thanks! I keep worrying its too dark... but not today! you only get one chapter a day! Thats better than a lot of writers I follow, i'm lucky to get a new chapter a week!
645719 and what, leave her daughter all alone? Twilight had something to live for, even if the rest of her life was hell. Had Twilight not ended up in the clutches of Dozer, Dawn would have been Twilight's salvation.
643172 Suddenly, dinosaurs. Thousands of them.
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644926 :O i'm not that bad am i?!
644934 No, quite the opposite. This story is so good, even dinosaurs want to read it. They read it when they're on a break from helping the Nazis re-write history again.
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oh thats fucking dark.
i love it keep going, cant wait for next chapter
645016 thanks! I keep worrying its too dark... but not today! you only get one chapter a day! Thats better than a lot of writers I follow, i'm lucky to get a new chapter a week!
Very sad story. But I am glad that I am reading it. Is that wrong?
So dark I cant see my carapace...
*shrug* You definitely have me wondering what will happen to the poor two though.
meh needs to be about 20% more badass
645487 Awwr... oh well, thats about the best I had in mind for her. For a fairly messed up pony in chains, i thought that was pretty good.
645494 fairly is a understatement i think she would be better in iraq than there jeese
If I was Twilight I would have just banged my head into the wall repeatedly until I went brain dead.
645719 and what, leave her daughter all alone? Twilight had something to live for, even if the rest of her life was hell. Had Twilight not ended up in the clutches of Dozer, Dawn would have been Twilight's salvation.
Hard to believe, but yeah, it coulda been worse for Twilight.
I assumed Grasson was gonna do it Unsullied training style and make his son kill Dawn while Twi watched.
♫Grimdark!♫
Is it the moon sugar I think it's the moon sugar. Definitely adds flavor.