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I might not say that Xavier, however I do wish that those who felt they had to dislike my word would at least take the time to tell me why, however, I do appreciate your vote, I'm looking forwards to getting more written in the near future!

hmm this is good story and well written but stil

Twilight found Twilight making her way
What?

probably a small miss but you should fix it to make it perfect.

632177 it was intended to be a play on words, it was twilight when Twilight left, like 'the morning sun found Dawn leaving her house' >_> but i guess i could go back in and clarify

ah lol okay that explains it

i forgot to re-add itallics, center the stars, and indent and format this! silly me, should look better now!

Any chance that we can find out why Shining Armor died? I will have to admit I actually felt depressed when Twilight said “goodbye Big brother best friend… Forever.”

632930 I put some thought into it at the time, but i simply wasn't sure what would be a befitting death for him, and the amount of effort needed to add that, it simply didn't contribute to the story, its not how he died that mattered, its what comes next. You can rest assured that he died in some valiant manner properly befitting a Knight Captain of Equestria. Perhaps i will tie it into the story later, I've got a vauge idea forming in my head, now that i started putting some extra thought into it, but we'll see.

did i mention this story is what I've been looking for when I'm in a grimdark or just dark mood ill just say this DON'T YOU BUCKING DARE GET SCARED AND RUSH THIS HALF WAY THROUGH I'M SICK OF PEOPLE DOING THAT ITS A GOOD STORY SO DON'T!

(oh and completely unrelated but is twi going to pull something badass? if she is then i can add this to my group but I'm just using that as a excuse to have you have twilight rip somepony apart)

633639 lol! i'm not planning on rushing or backing out on my design, however... i'm not exactly planning any badassery here, shes a capable pony, but shes just... swallowed up by the path she is on, i'll let my story tell the rest as i write it.

633868fine granted i guess i can abuse admin and get this in there just to tick off some of my members(all three of them i love not careing)

633910 *snickers* well, i keep thinking about reader suggestions too much, and i did figure out a place where Twilight could have a few moments of 'badassery' to contribute, but we'll see. I guess this wouldn't be a good Twilight story without a bit more magic

Awesome so far!
Also, Moon sugar = DRUGS.

i can't write without inspiration, but when i suddenly find that inspiration... i can't stop until i'm done

I fully relate. I go through long spells when I just cannot get inspired to write, then one day, the Muse bites me hard in the ass, and I just HAVE to keep writing.

Celestia should thank her lucky stars you can't Walter White together some Moon Sugar under a laundry factory somewhere.

Damn Twi, couldn't just get hooked on cough syrup or something, naw you had to start fuckin' with FISHSCALE.

moon sugar... that name sounds familiar...

EDIT: i finished the entire fic, and i do agree that it is one of the best on the fimfiction.
this song came up on my itunes genius mix while i was reading, and i thought it was fitting.

I suck at titles, I've got titles i can use for other chapters, but i couldn't think of a good one for this chapter... its a lame title... sigh

How about The Sweetened Moon?