Loved it!! I cant wait for the conclusion as I love this kind of drama in stories, it really lets your emotions run wild!
Can't wait for the next one!
"The orange pony, AJ, moved up behind the rainbow maned pony, Dash, and put a hoof on her shoulder, before giving her a bit of a hug from behind, “We all missed her, we are all glad she’s bad…"
662990 *edits* I'm sure my work is rife with little typos i failed to notice, I don't go back over my work after writing it most times, but thanks :P I had to wait till my parents went to bed before writing the emotional scenes, it would have been awkward trying to explain that i'm crying 'cause i'm writing a sad scene
663002 I have to agree! The most profound part for me was when the doctor told them what had happened to her, and portraying the emotions of the 5 and how heartbreaking that is... brilliant!
663009 Thanks a lot! I feel kind of silly for using the same ending to 2 chapters in a row, though i do feel like i am losing a bit of steam on this story. I might be able to fit in a couple more chapters, but i am writing out of ideas, truthfully. I will get it finished however, i know how i am starting the next chapter, though I am not totally sure how it will end...
waiting for more.... You've done well enough now, I don't see how you can botch up the ending... unless you rush it horribly but we all know you will not do that Rightttttt?
663146 lol, why would i rrush the ending? no i always believe in doing things right the first time, i want the end to be right. This story has been dark, it has been ugly, it has been sad, and by the end, i hope to leave my readers with the tears of joy they need to make this story complete.
hows signs of prolonged torture and sexual abuse and torture,\ thats alot of torture also so far i loved this story but i do say (oh crap its on the other computer)
663363 LoL! I have tried really hard to keep Pinkie's attitude somewhat upbeat and not let he go straighthaired Pinkamina on us all, but i think if she ever saw Dozer or Grasson, she would be needing a good bath to get the blood out, and a new perm.
Loved it!! I cant wait for the conclusion as I love this kind of drama in stories, it really lets your emotions run wild!
Can't wait for the next one!
"The orange pony, AJ, moved up behind the rainbow maned pony, Dash, and put a hoof on her shoulder, before giving her a bit of a hug from behind, “We all missed her, we are all glad she’s bad…"
Think that's supposed to be back!
662990 *edits* I'm sure my work is rife with little typos i failed to notice, I don't go back over my work after writing it most times, but thanks :P I had to wait till my parents went to bed before writing the emotional scenes, it would have been awkward trying to explain that i'm crying 'cause i'm writing a sad scene
YES, YES, YES! I have waited all day for this! (hope I am not sounding to desperate , I just like this alot)
This chapter is very good.
Only 1 more chapter.... I hope not. I can see maybe 2 or 3 more at least. But its your story and you can tell it how you want.
I can't wait in till you post again. Thanks for all the hard work you put into this. It is really something amazing.
663002 I have to agree! The most profound part for me was when the doctor told them what had happened to her, and portraying the emotions of the 5 and how heartbreaking that is... brilliant!
663009 Thanks a lot! I feel kind of silly for using the same ending to 2 chapters in a row, though i do feel like i am losing a bit of steam on this story. I might be able to fit in a couple more chapters, but i am writing out of ideas, truthfully. I will get it finished however, i know how i am starting the next chapter, though I am not totally sure how it will end...
663033 What ever you do, it will be good.
waiting for more.... You've done well enough now, I don't see how you can botch up the ending... unless you rush it horribly but we all know you will not do that Rightttttt?
663146 lol, why would i rrush the ending? no i always believe in doing things right the first time, i want the end to be right. This story has been dark, it has been ugly, it has been sad, and by the end, i hope to leave my readers with the tears of joy they need to make this story complete.
hows signs of prolonged torture and sexual abuse and torture,\
thats alot of torture
also so far i loved this story but i do say (oh crap its on the other computer)
663343FOUND IT!!!
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but as always
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663363 LoL! I have tried really hard to keep Pinkie's attitude somewhat upbeat and not let he go straighthaired Pinkamina on us all, but i think if she ever saw Dozer or Grasson, she would be needing a good bath to get the blood out, and a new perm.
Twilight has the BEST crazy faces!
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I gotta say, I'm expecting Rainbow Dash to go all apeshit on Twilight when she wakes up.