Two heroes face their greatest challenge yet on a world far unlike any they've ever visited. Follow Commander Anthony Dubias and Lieutenant Commander Rebecca Thorne as they lead a loyal crew through the greatest depths of hell hidden in paradise.
Considering the amount of likes and praise I'm getting, it looks like my next few chapters will be popping out pretty soon... as soon as I finish this frustrating college homework. Daw come on, that equation didn't work either!!! :(
I can't wait to see how they react to the pilots but there is one question that bugs me after I finished reading this? Is he bringing his titan with him when he goes to meet the locals. If not will he go with his usual loadout or just a simple dagger, pistol and few grenades? Either way, I hope to see a new chapter soon.
6169786 expect a full pilot loadout sans a few things such as heavy ordinance. It's a diplomatic meeting, not a combat zone. Still their experiences taught them to be prepared. There is some relevance to this revelation but I leave it to the audience to try and predict just what it means for them to have such a loadout. What could happen and such.
6171713 lol, fair point but still to go in with full loadout makes me wonder......Maybe the changelings decides to play party crashers?........Dammit not its got me deathly curious! Why you be so mean?! lol
6149035 Thanks. :) Expect more chapters, very often.
Loving it!
Considering the amount of likes and praise I'm getting, it looks like my next few chapters will be popping out pretty soon... as soon as I finish this frustrating college homework. Daw come on, that equation didn't work either!!! :(
Where's Twilight when you need her?
I can't wait to see how they react to the pilots but there is one question that bugs me after I finished reading this? Is he bringing his titan with him when he goes to meet the locals. If not will he go with his usual loadout or just a simple dagger, pistol and few grenades? Either way, I hope to see a new chapter soon.
6169786 expect a full pilot loadout sans a few things such as heavy ordinance. It's a diplomatic meeting, not a combat zone. Still their experiences taught them to be prepared. There is some relevance to this revelation but I leave it to the audience to try and predict just what it means for them to have such a loadout. What could happen and such.
6171713 lol, fair point but still to go in with full loadout makes me wonder......Maybe the changelings decides to play party crashers?........Dammit not its got me deathly curious! Why you be so mean?! lol
I enjoyed this very much, *smashes like button* now to wait for a new chapter...
6180639 Agreed.
6171713 friends are closer than extended family?
I love the Amritsar of this story so for.