ok i love the story but just keep it real i think you should include the sex but just keep it subtle don't leave out to many detail but no need to get in to deep erotica but heavy romance would be good just a thought keep up the great* story
I love this everyone out there shold lave this, considering there arent that many fics with zecora as main character like I said before I love this more than relaxing chinese music (ITS AWESOME!) so you just do what you think would be best. I for one, think that should keep it somewhat clean at least for a couple of chapters, y'know? so that it doesnt become like those fics with derpy and twi, where every chapter is all: "sup" "sup" "blow me and ride me till I cum 50 times" "sure!" [insert blowjob and general sex here]
Oh wow... That's one of the nicest comments ive ever read. ;u; thank you so much for the compliment and the support! I'm in the process of finishing a short story for a friend but I'm already about halfway done with the next chapter.
856406GOOD NOW KEEP WORKING YA LAZY BUM!! I have some serious mood swings sometimes for whatever reason but yeah HURRY THE FUCK UP! Im sorry ok people say I might be bipolar--whatever that means-- and thats the reason I doubt it but really, people do say I might actually be bipolar, so who knows!
Aww less clop well i hope theres gonna be a wedding soon
No mature stuff this time around.
Me: Dammit!
Still, good job. This is coming along quite nicely.
Mature stuff or not its still a great story so either way is a good idea can't wait to read what the next chapter will hold
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Thanks so much for the compliments guys! I'm working on the next chapter now so stay tuned!
More chapters!
792551 patience little filly
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ok i love the story but just keep it real i think you should include the sex but just keep it subtle don't leave out to many detail but no need to get in to deep erotica but heavy romance would be good just a thought keep up the great* story
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28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lwq349V6jU1qjsq03o1_400.jpg and i love it
you have my favorite and thumbs
I love this
everyone out there shold lave this, considering there arent that many fics with zecora as main character
like I said before I love this more than relaxing chinese music (ITS AWESOME!)
so you just do what you think would be best.
I for one, think that should keep it somewhat clean at least for a couple of chapters, y'know?
so that it doesnt become like those fics with derpy and twi, where every chapter is all:
"sup"
"sup"
"blow me and ride me till I cum 50 times"
"sure!"
[insert blowjob and general sex here]
its stupid
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Oh wow... That's one of the nicest comments ive ever read. ;u; thank you so much for the compliment and the support! I'm in the process of finishing a short story for a friend but I'm already about halfway done with the next chapter.
856406GOOD
NOW KEEP WORKING YA LAZY BUM!!
I have some serious mood swings sometimes for whatever reason
but yeah HURRY THE FUCK UP!
Im sorry ok
people say I might be bipolar--whatever that means-- and thats the reason
I doubt it
but really, people do say I might actually be bipolar, so who knows!
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QUIET CHILD ITS THE 4th of JULY! I'll be working later tonight
856491im mexican
I DONT GIVE A SHIT!
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ME NEITHER BUT I LOVE FIREWORKS
856500I dont
they're scarwy
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O.O I don't know you lol
856618like I said
wierd mood swings
*pinkie shrug*