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Oh, will Dust and Neon bring Hope and Sandra in their rivalry? Or will Hope and Sandra (and maybe Will/Cindy) bring them out of it?
Only the typos know.
They weren't mentioned in the notes, so someone had to.
6229782 I like keeping ponies on their toes.
Yikes. This is why blindly teleporting through a war zone is never a good idea. Someone's going to get shot. Still, they've gotten back to the base, with two shining examples of Defeat Equals Friendship. With Neon improving the infrastructure, maybe they can deal with the issues in New York soon.
Also, did Neon intrude on a telepathic conversation at the end there?
Also, new shipment of typos:
Unneeded capitalization.
Two cases of double spaces.
6229977 Fixed!
6229803 Ponies don't have toes.
6229977
Nope, Will was thinking about the genetics of Gifted royalty, and Neon was carrying on a conversation about electricity.
This could be revised in a few ways, but inserting 'that' between 'ponies' and 'shared' sticks out.
None. They don't wear pants anymore... At least of which we are aware of *wink, wink, nudge*.
It's good to see you addressed the Dust Dusk name dilemma, wouldn't want a typo about that. Good chapter! Awaiting more!
I'm waiting for the tatzlponies unique ability of storing things (including ponies) in their stomachs to be used.
Don't you mean who gets priority mane brushing?
6230160 Essentially each fetlock is a single toe with hoof being a toenail, so actually keeping ponies on their toe nails, (*chuckle*)