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Personally don't care since it's that type of story, but you forgot a clop warning this time. Might want to add one for consistency's sake.
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Looks like that was fixed before I saw the update, though it is amusing that it would have been missed, as this is one of the cloppiest chapters yet.
ok now we need a 3 way of 4 way after all there is at lest 2 with both genders.
Harts Fire
ok maybe I should get my mind out of the gutter.
Type spotted! FIRE!
'med' should be 'met' I think.
I'm rather curious how many variations of clop this story will have going forward, provided it doesn't attempt to repeat itself.
So far, to my recollection, we've had:
The random assaults while exploring the city, no personal space awkwardness.
Sandra slowly giving in, kissing.
Cindy appearing and escalating Sandra, tatzlpony female on male, tongue / tentacle play.
Randomly getting turned on while the horn was being examined / fondled.
'Pumping' Lone Wolf for information, handjob
Voyeur watching Lone Wing and Jack (male male 69); transforming Jack.
Crowd sensual tongue bath of Will, many on herm.
Full blown giving in and transformation with Sandra. Tatzlpony female on herm, transformation, loving.
Crystal transformation into futanari. Voyeur, transformation, watching arousal.
Crystal on Will + help orgy that lasted for hours, with both Crystal and Will 'trapped' and at the mercy of the help. If Will still has any reservations about taking a lady's role or being intimate with a male afterwards is unknown.
The list doesn't count all the casual references to sex or anatomy like all the times Lone Wing is described as unable to contain himself.
I wonder if all the love making is a phase (entering heat upon transformation hitting a critical point) or a constant state. It would be difficult to build a society that was like that all the time, assuming those involved don't gain a tolerance against urges after awhile.
Personally, I suggest more of a summary of casual acts and new detailed clop specific sections be more kinky to not appear repetitive.
6057164 Am I going overboard? I don't want a boring fic for surely (especially what with it being paid for and all).
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It'd only be boring if it got repetitive with the clop. For instance, Cindy claimed that they'd be back to plow Sandra. Except we've already seen Sandra be plowed before, so another update focused entirely on that would feel wasted (especially since each chapter pretty much only has one or two things of note happening per update) since it was already done, unless it was done significantly differently or kinkier. Otherwise, if it's important to note it happens, a summary is fine. Like you summarize eating food; it's no longer plot relevant to go into detail with sex that is similar to what has already been described.
I'm all for new novel, exotic, and/or kinky situations though! I honestly liked this chapter and the Lone Wing/Jack one the best so far because both were pretty kinky and fairly novel compared to what came before. Heck, I liked the 'pumping' Lone Wing for information one too because while clop was happening, it wasn't the focus of intrigue, making it quite a unique read. But reading chapters that just repeat those performances would feel kinda wasted, unless, again, it was done in a new and interesting way.
is it bad that i literally feel the exact same way as it been told it the story? because when i realized things the exact moment that 'William' realized the same thing before it was told like 1 second before it was written in the story... it really feels weird man holy crap
Sorry about my English it isn't my native language
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I haven't felt any repetition yet, personally.
Things have been pretty well-varied so far.
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My two cents on this, but I think a bit of repetition would be both interesting and even an outright good thing.
The William (and even to a lesser part Cindy) aren't the same person that set out on this journey after all, in both body, mind —if the essence of The Gift is what I think it's been implied, and even soul.
Take in the latest chapter, for instance. How William have started sharing outright thoughts with Cindy during even such intimate moments. How it was 'our' body during the same. How William even seems exited to have a male(ish) lover, despite considering Sandra the 'favorite.'
That's a far cry from the dude that didn't care much for even a mare sticking her tongue down his throat earlier. Or even how he mostly ignored the specifics of how Lone Wing got 'pumped' for information just a few chapters ago.
Not certain if he's ready for such a step quite yet, but at this rate I wouldn't be that surprised to see a scene with Cindy sqeeing in joy at William going down on 'our Crystal' or something akin to that.
6056896 Fixed!
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I don't consider a similar setup to be the bad kind of repetition provided the the circumstances or the act is different. It's why I had no problem with the second Sandra clop scene; it was different in enough ways from the first scene.
The story hasn't had the bad kind of repetition yet, I was merely remarking that with the increased clop frequency mixed with the transformation appearing to be stable for them both, I can't help but imagine it might get repetitive for, say, Sandra and Will after a few more times.