Watching Gray's memories was very sweet, especially with how he interacted with Celestia and his friendship with the ponies of ancient times.

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I am glad you like it, there is only one more chapter that shows his past :P after that... Canterlot

Honestly this is pretty damn interesting. You have a good idea and you seem to know where you are going with this but you need a proof-reader or an editor. Excellent concept but really a lot hope for in the execution.

Oh well... I'll still track this since you actually got me interested.

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Thanks bro, I know I am not the best in making the scenes but I am trying to change that on chapter four.

It is nice to know that people are actually interesting in my story.

P.S. Give your energy to me! cause this man ain't gonna sleep sh**!

P.S.S. Now I understand how hard it is to pick a battle song... they are all so beautiful.... oh, spoiler alert!

P.S.S.S. /) For you guy/girl behind that screen and gave me a like or is interested in ma story!

A... a Fairy Tail Displaced!?!?!?!?!? Thank you good sir!

>Going to Comic-Con
Good god, when will it end?
I don't care how well you write, from what little you've written you might be very good. but please, find something else to write about. This genre of ordinary-kid-that-looks-like-something-he's-not-gets-magically-dragged-into-Equestria started being stereotyped and trite the moment it was first concieved. Please. We don't need yet another hundred thousand of the same exact thing. Put your talents to use on something interesting.

5996076 you dont like the genre thats fine dont read it and certainly dont make a comment about your dislike for said genre

Actually that was a pretty embarrassing day, I remember when all the adult looked at me weird and before I notice I was without my t-shirt and shoes, how did they dissapear eluded me, it made me titter and my face red as a tomato. I laugh at the memory of me only on my new shorts in front of ninety or something guards, and most of them where mares.

Glad that he got that quirk too! But also wondering he developed it that late. I mean, years passed in this form if I read it right.

This seriously needs an editor. It's almost painful to read at times.