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please tell me chrysalis dont kill cadance
I CANT WAIT PLEASE MOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRR
So why did Gray let himself get thrown out of the cathedral? He couldn't do nothing, which means he should of used Ice Make Unlimited.
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Just used something that beats ice make unlimited(Instant freeze's one of the strongest spells as seeing in the manga able to freeze mother bucking twisters)? Was being held by magic way stronger than his? Mention that he used his magic without breaks(which fucks him cause lets him unable to use his magic for ten minutes.)? That and when he began to fall towards the ground he said it.
or you mean when fighting the Changelings O.P.M.B.S. squat(OverPowered Mother Buckers Squat)?
Eh, I could have but really. Do you really wish for a overpowered displaced that follow those rules?
So thinking about this rules I said. 'Fuck it, not another of those stories.' He isn't overpowered and there will be enemies stronger than Gray. What is experience alone against experience AND power? Only quick thinking and help could help beat those. I wanted to make the fight longer but that would make like... 14k words or more and I think that is over doing things xD.
Just look from my point of view. Gray regressed back in years. He only have the memories and experiences from those times but of what use does a memory of... this is an example: stopping a dragon on its tracks with bare hands works if you don't have the magic or strength to do so? and no, he cant actually stop a dragon with his bare hands even when he was at his peak. That would made him something like an Ulquirra(There was a story about him doing this somewhere...) and he isn't a god only a trained soldier with magic almost as strong as Celestia but even so he can only freeze or create things not use his magic like the unicorns's and stop them by holding them in the air :P Sorry got distracted, the point is. His magic is not as stronger and compared to Chrysalis? It is like trying to compare an ant with a giant tarantula. Search it, the little ant would be fucked up unless it have reinforcements. Could make the mane six help? Sure but the only one with magic at least a little decent is knocked out and the others? I could have but then I would have made the ire of the Queen go towards them too and that is something I didn't want xD.
Hope I clear ur confusion ma friend.
6569058 More just pointing out a double negative. Could not do nothing. Which is could do something.
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What? I don't get it. My English continue being sore, It says he can't do anything at the moment. Or well I'm on school can't really see what O wrote but I don't see the error really.
But oh well. I think the problem here is wrong spelling on my part xD gotta correct it when I return home :P thanks for pointing that out xD
6569193 It's right before Chrysalis launches him.
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Thank you may dear friend. Now I will correct them when I finish this chapter I'm working on.
6570847 Of course. If you need an extra editor, don't be afraid to PM me. I'm always willing to help, and there were a lot more errors in most of the chapters.
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Yeah, I need an editor. Mostly because as you can see I have some, well many misspelling errors? -Gonna chalk them as grammatical errors- Since now I didn't knew that 'were' and 'where' are different depending on the context and action(... not looking forward to re-read the whole story xD). The royal talking of Luna(maybe their parents too, forgot what the heck did they say-talked- cause time passed since I last read that chapter xD) is a little... rough at the edges? Eh. Well I'm very grateful with all your help on the comments, it is difficult to write a story but I'm not gonna give up until I see the 'Incomplete' without the 'In'.
I will be correcting all errors pointed at Thursday. I'm in a very serious status at school but I don't want to
intrudeinconveniencetrouble my friend by forcing his story to freeze until I finish my exams. The finals starts next week and I'm lacking my works that I really need to put on day before it is too late xD.What? I'd say I was a lazy ass, didn't I?
P.S. This image represents my situation perfectly xD.
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P.S.S. Now that I think about it... well more like just notice. I have been lacking the use of I'd and We'r I believe? Maybe, but I don't trust myself. Yes, by that sole comment you can see how much my friends trust in me xD.
6570987 Alright then. Just PM me when you're ready to receive my email for gdocs. You do have gdocs don't you?
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That's how Wolf and I are working on these chapter to come-and the last one I upload- xD
6571059 I see. Good.
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For the record I never knew she existed until I searched for her name on google xD. Didn't find her story though... well never actually searched for it. But I hear the lore that she is supposed to be a blind pony or spirit.
Huh. He still used his name once before. I remember that it stood somewhere.
Katekyo Hitman Reborn reference!
Shipping?!
I'm probably overreacting again. More likely would be that she blushed because of thinking of Gray as female, while his chest was exposed. Chrysalis was ogling him!
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Snow Drop? Might be hard to find some story on her. I mean, there is a HiE story with her, but I think she first appeared in a Youtube video. Can't be too sure since I never really looked into it. But here, have a look at this video. It tells her story: