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I can make Arts's scythe with a Moving edge so its a staff unless she pressures it In the right spot but I have no idea of making Night a master craftsman after less then an year and as awesome as those weapons are they are master tier not to mention they will require time and enchantment magic which Night lacks
but there will be this by the time of crystal empire
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Not bad, but you should definitely work on your clop writing.
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More descriptive or more positions or ??? just asking so I know for next time .
I mean there probably wont be another full clop chapter but there will most likely be more clop so reference is always good
6065593 I say try to describe the sensations they're both feeling and make it longer. Then you would have a fairly decent clop chapter
P.S I predict trouble for Josh in the near future
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We have a prophet here![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
Also thanks for the sugestions
6065682 no problem now this may or may not be your cup of tea but if you want to really get better at clop then your best bet would be to read it yourself and compare with your own scenes. If you want to know which stories have to best clop in my opinion just send me a pm
6065593 More descriptive. I've never written clop, nor do I intend to, so it might be wise not to listen to me, but I'd apply a concept of write it out, and see how much more I can stretch it after my own standard of what I feel would work.
im guessing Night and Luna aren't going to be to happy about this in the morning, especially Celestial![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
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What if I told you that no one knows about Pinkie because of cadences spell?[![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
What do you think would happen to the pink pony> place your bets or just wait till I write the chapter and find out.
wouldn't love poison would make them want to F%^K each others brains out then F%^K them back in 24/7.
wait so chrysalis loves blueblood or just using him as a plesurable slave like i read some fanfics were queen chyrsalis in love with blue blood or he is just her bich in this one just pm me back im just curious about it p.s oh good chapter by the way as well as the other ones i just didnt bother too review the other ones because there ok![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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