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Honestly I,ve read this far and I have only two things to say...
You need an editor spelling is practically nonexistent. As well as grammer but its good in other areas. Or a spelling check.
Its amazing how you made celestia look like a dictator though... Please tell me she hasn't created the atomic bomb!
So I give this a 9/10 since I was the same way with grammer when I started out if you want I could send you the first story I ever made... I was horrible.
Oh also Luna is best pony
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{You are a braver man then I}Pinkie is best pony along with her family but Luna is in a very close second.
I think I know who this mystery pony is, it's actually discord.
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I do try to keep to the show timeline just adding Josh/Night in
I have recently started to read this story and I wanted to say that this story is very good and well written, aside from a few spelling errors, I can't seem to find anything else that is wrong with this. So I say in conclusion keep up the good work
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Thank you I will try and with the help of the readers hopefully we can even get rid of the mistakes caused by my poor grammar.
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Like I said without some of the readers proofreading my story it would be unreadable.
Thanks for the correction.
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No thank you for making this wonderful story also I think you meant 'rid not read of all of the mistakes in my story'
Celestia. With knife
*Scrol down*
damm