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Not much happening in this chapter I hope their will be more action soon.
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I did originally plan for more action, but that kind of went awry. Part of it was I had to get the team to figure out what was going on, but a part of it was Mind Shade/Golden Luck kinda started to grow out a little bit, and it wound up being kind of a look into her thought process.
I already know what's going to happen with Angel Grace, and Spiral Dream, Grey, and Cloud aren't my OCs so I don't want to mess with them too much. So Mind Shade is going to get a lot of surprise development I think, and she's actually a lot of fun to write.
Anyway, since study isn't very interesting to write about, we're probably going to focus on the team looking for Cloud in the next chapter.
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Angel Grace and Mind Shade are your only OCs here? [What about the villains?]
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Angel Grace and Mind Shade are the only two characters involved in the plot that are my sole creation. There's basically three 'villains' outside of Chrysalis (What, you didn't think she'd forget about that betrayal?). Two of them are someone else's OC, used with permission, and the third is a bit more complicated.
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Ah I see. Nice writing, by the way. Keep it up! Waiting for a few more action sequences (not saying I enjoyed the others less, just...looking forward to some action )