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5567729 Well that's a childhood nightmare waiting to happen. 0.o. Anyways congrads on first comment. Be sure to tell me who you want in the next installment.

Fluttershy in a pink ballerina outfit stripping And singing a lullaby going slower and getting more aroused as she goes

Lyra with a human-shaped dildo.

Oooooh Oooooh! Do Cadence next!!

Octavia doing a pole dance

Octavia playing her "instrument" if you know what I mean.

Or maybe some Lyra... or UHHH Cheerilee!

Do some Cheerilee!

Either spike or Gilda would be really nice

This is the dream for every clopper right here
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Aged up Babs or Sonata.

"Thou is" sounds incorrect. Surely that's like saying "you is". It should be "Thou art".
Also should be "thy cock" not "thou's cock".
Also she says "Thy sister" which means your sister... when she should say "Our sister"
Do you even Luna, bro?

5570448 I'll look that up and fix it. Thank you for the comment. Was pondering it but everything sounds weird if you don't fully commit to old english style language.

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I don't have nightmares.

5570448 There that should fix the small errors on Old English. According to my research it's not far and wide to be wrong to use the words in the same ways but it does almost have the same meanings. Sorry for the confusion the story is updated and should give a better read thank you for you constructive criticism. Now if I get the other five dislikes to explain what they didn't like about the story and I should be golden.

5570710 Yes because dirty dreams every constant night is not horrifying. Actually....sounds more like a high school dream.

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I wasn't replying to the image, just the Nightmare part.

And huh the fic title reminds me of Come back to me

You should do Celestia, then Cadence, then Twilight, then the rest of the mane six, then Derpy, then Lyra, then Octavia, then the CMC, then Rumble, then Flim, then Flam, then Emile (the spartan) with luna. What? Can't i have fantasies too? No? Well fuck you.

5574039 Well that's what this series is for. I can do them all except. Um...the Spartan one. Already planning on Octavia but I have to do some research on her before I write so I can grab the essence that is well. The fandom's Octavia.

Just awesome.

5574893 Thank ya kindly. Naw if ya don't mind. I gots to be focusing more on my southern drawl. Applejack's turn coming your way. So keep ur eyes peeled and ur ears open. It's goin ta be one hella of ride! YEEHAW! Ahem AHEEEEM! Blah....Jesus. Well mainly focusing on my other story "The Colt Inside." I'll be working on this on another time.

5574913 I will wait with impatience. In the meantime, read the "The Colt Inside." story.

Queen Chrysalis!!! With King Sombra if you can/will!

5574254 Awww. Anyways, thanks for listening.

5585158 No problem. But it's on my list now for future chapters. I may do them who knows? Btw I listening to my followers suggestions more than random comments. Have to keep my fans happy.

5585214 That is true.

5570803 Yo, I didn't thumb down your story for that geez.

I want me some Vinyl Scratch

5604121 There we go. I was wondering when I would hear her name.

5604199 lol, she is my favorite pony, I would love to see her worked into this

5604312 Right after her best friend joins the mix.

5604356 Octy of course

5604380 I prefer calling her Tavi.

5604492 fair enough

trixie In A foot fetish nylons high heels legs jerk off encouragement and her playing with herself

I know I can post my favourite pony but is it ok to see what I wanna see