Chapter 3: Queen of Equestria
Charming Thunder entered the chamber of the Council of Friendship after he returned from the Crystal Empire. He then saw Twilight sitting on her chair who then turned to see him. She then rushed to him and gave him a tight hug. "Are you alright?" Twilight asked worried. "I heard that something happened at the Crystal Empire. You could see the smoke from here."
"I'm fine," Charming Thunder reassured. "I just came to see if you are alright."
"What's happened?"
"The Crystal Knights were plotting to overthrow Celestia."
"I can't believe that." Twilight then looked down to the floor as Charming Thunder continued his story.
"Trixie has told me everything about one knight talking to a hooded figure she has never met before."
Twilight then looked back up at her husband as she asked, "What are we going to do?" The red unicorn turned away from her wife and thought about it.
"I will report this matter to Celestia. She was wondering about a traitor in Equestria. And I believe that Trixie should be given credit for it."
"I'll tell Trixie that you are heading to Canterlot and to meet you here."
"That won't be necessary, dear. I already told her to meet me at the hangar of the castle before I marched into the temple." Twilight then felt worried as Charming Thunder walked up to her and raised her chin to his eye level. Have faith, my love. Soon everything will be over. for now I must head to Canterlot. Wait for me 'til I return." He then walked past her as he headed straight to the hangar to meet up with Trixie.
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"I see," Celestia said as Charming Thunder ended his story about what happened earlier at the Crystal Empire. "So the Crystal Knights were plotting to overthrow me and our empire. And what of the hooded figure, Trixie? Did you ever see if it was a pony or not?" Trixie wore her hat and cape now that she knows the truth about the Crystal Knights.
"No," she said. "Trixie did not see his face."
"Can you leave me and the princess for the moment, Trixie?" Charming Thunder asked. Trixie then stepped out of Celestia's bed chambers as Charming Thunder had another part of the story to discuss. "There is an issue. Far more worse than the Crystal Knights. Are you familiar with someone named Slade?"
Celestia gasped and then answered, "Not a someone. But something." Celestia walked up to the balcony from her bedroom as Charming Thunder followed. "Nopony knows of his nature but some call him the Son of Discord."
"That's the thing. My father told me everything about the ancient draconequus race during the Discord Wars. Was Slade apart of it?"
"Indeed he was. Charming, a thousand years ago I fought in the Discord Wars along with my sister Luna. Slade was once a Crystal Knight until he met Discord during the war." She then used her magic to reveal an image like a movie as she continued. "He was a powerful warrior during the war. When I sent him along with three knights to arrest Discord, the lord of chaos struck down his companions until he was the only one left. Discord thought about killing him but he had other things in mind in store for him. so he made Slade an offer to join him to save his dying wife from certain death by giving him powers to restore the living and the dead." Slade in the image then knelt before Discord as she continued, "He agreed to the terms and called him the Son of Discord. One by one, every kingdom was attacked by him and draconequus soldiers. When Discord corrupted your father, me and Luna rushed to stop him from his plan to rule the Crystal Kningdom and seal him away as a shadow. Little did Discord not realize that when the kingdom was cursed, it sealed Slade away along with it." The image then faded away as Charming Thunder thought about what happened next.
"And now he was released and is planning to bring back the draconequus race."
"Exactly."
"Thanks for the story Celestia. Is there anything else I could be of assistance with now that the traitors are dealt with?"
"Nothing at the moment. Except that somepony requests to meet with you. Somepony has now been crowned the queen of Equestria and is now in Manehattan."
"I will leave at once then." Charming Thunder was about to walk out the door when Celestia stopped him for a moment.
"She only wants to see you alone."
"As you say, auntie." Charming Thunder then stepped out of the door and saw Trixie. "Trixie, return to Ponyville."
"Where the hey are you going then?"
"To Manehattan. The new queen of Equestria has requested my presence alone."
"I understand." Charming Thunder then continued to walk out to the shuttle port to take a flight to Manehattan.
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Manehattan was a crowded place since the last tie Twilight and her friends were here. He then approached a castle with two blue royal guards at the door. One of the guards noticed Charming Thunder approaching and opened the doors for him as he was being expected. He then walked up the stairs until he reached a door which leads to the throne room. The guards opened the doors for him and walked ahead of him. Music played in the room as he walked through as crowds of ponies where on each side. One guard stood at the side of the staircase where the queen sits. Charming Thunder couldn't get a glimpse of her face. The queen then leaned forward and raised her hoof to stop the music. He now recognized who she is. It was her mother; Amidala. "Mother?" he said as he stopped.
"Charming?" she said as she walked down the stairs. "Is it really?" She then approached Charming Thunder as she laughed and gave him a tight hug. "CHARMING!!"
"MOTHER!!" They both released the embrace as they laughed. "Look at you. A queen?"
"And look at you. A son who has a daughter now." Charming Thunder laughed at her response and gave her a hug.
"Oh, mom. It is so good to see you."
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At the dinning room, Charming Thunder sat next to his mother along with some guests. "I heard that the Crystal Knights are no more," she started. "Care to explain?"
"There was an evil plot going on to overthrow Celestia," Charming Thunder said. "And Trixie was the only pony who witnessed it."
"I see."
"And now Celestia fears that the Son of Discord returning."
"You mean Slade?"
"Yes. Why? did you know him?"
"Lets just say that before you were born, he was once a good friend to your father during the Discord Wars."
"There are some things I already so there is no need to--" He was interrupted when a guard entere the room and rushed to him. He then whispered into his ear telling him that something happened. "What?!" He then got up from his chair as he said, "Sorry to keep the visit short, mom, but something's happened."
"What's going on?" she said as Charming Thunder stopped at the door.
"My daughter is...missing."
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5518962 He straight up said its a sarcastic comment when he was praising it.
5518962 Clearly you just cant seem to understand how everyone feels about this story, so before you delete this comment, hear me out because you just need someone to give it to you bluntly.
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...its absolutely awful, the worst Star Wars crossover I have seen to date and thats coming from a Star Wars fanboy. Its taking all of my energy not to go ballistic and make a rage comment about this thing or post up a clip of a reviewer from youtube saying its awful in some way, because if I do either of those things its a one way road to delete-ville, Im already on thin ice with you as is from what Im expecting. Please reply to this comment with questions on what you did wrong or how to improve, dont just ignore this or delete it. Maybe there could be a chance for you if you just start over with better writing skills and knowledge of wrong from right.
5587295 private message me on what I should do. I appreciate it.
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Hello good sir. Even though I'm new to the system here, I want to talk to you about something. Have you thought about adding a new military force? I have a profile and I am a leader to a organization called "The Phantom Consortium". We spread corruption but the tech we get is from this link.
Zann Consortium
Now, some call us bad guys and some call us good guys. However, conquest is NOT our way.
5953125 I'll keep that in mind. You want me to write a side story fanfic based on them?
List the name of characters who are in that group for me.
5955292 I was thinking that Suri Polomare should be second command cause Sunset Shimmer is still in the human world.
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I agree with the idea. But what about HK-47? Last I recall during the Revan crisis, Charming Thunder destroyed him..... Wait! I have an idea! Let's say that I found him, repair him, and reprogramed him. But you also need to know what I'm capable of since only Luna and Sombra knows of my still existence, since I sent to the Ghost Zone (Because of Clockwork's request and Celestia permission). So, here is my data Darkbine did for me.
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Name: Danny Eclipse
Species: Equestrian Halfa [Pegasus Halfa] & Vampony [Pureblood]
Powers, skills, and abilities of: Danny Phantom
Other Abilities: Immune to Nightmares, Able to walk into others' dreams, can't be overshadowed by ghosts, & can use Ghost Artifacts to the same effectiveness (So he can wield Soul Shredder and Ember Mclaim's Guitar).
Relatives: Princess Luna/Nightmare Moon (Mother), Princess Celestia (Aunt), King Sombra (Father), Twilight Eclipse (Twin Sister), Princess Cadance (Cousin), Prince Blueblood (Cousin), & Nyx (Cousin-in-Blood)
Weapons: Lightsabers [4: 3 single blades (2 normal sized, 1 short size, like a dagger) & 1 Doudble-edged Lightsaber (Gained after killing Stalker)]
Swordman's skills: Duel Wielder (Mainly), Double-edged combat (Secondary), and single handed combat (Secondary, but only uses it when he uses only 1 lightsaber.)
1st Appearance: "Son of Princess Luna" by Danny Eclipse [me]. [It is still under work, but will be coming out soon. I have to work on it on a daily basis so you will be seeing it on FIMfiction under Danny Phantom and MLP Crossover.]
Feats: Help defeat Nightmare Moon, defeated Discord [By using the Reality Gauntlet], defeated Queen Chrysalis [At the 2nd try, was defeated at 1st because of her ability to change forms], help defeat Sunset Shimmer, defeated Pariah Dark [By himself and claimed the Throne of being "King of the Ghost Zone"], Defeated Twivine Sparkle [With Twilight Sparkle and Twilight Eclipse's help], and reformed Omega Brony.
Weaknesses: Weak to Ectoplasm Attacks, Sun Magic [Due to him being the Son of Princess Luna, and the dark hates light, it stands for reason he is weak against Princess Celestia's Magic]
Boyfriend [And later Husband] to: Rainbow Dash
CM Detail: Before he became a Halfa, that CM was tattooed to his flank, so it isn't an actual CM. [Meaning; Starlight Glimmer's Cutie Mark removing spell or The Staff of Sameness has no effect to him because he is a permanent Blank Flank. Clockwork Tattooed the insignia to his flank so he wouldn't be laughed at when he returns because he was believed to be a Blank Flank.]
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So now, you have my data. Use it wisely.
5958667 and Charming Thunder could be his long lost brother.
5958965 True, there is that part. But he wasn't exactly recovered from the ruins of the Crystal Empire. He was born in Canterlot. Oh, and Darkbine forgot to add the Vampony powers.
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Danny Eclipse's Vampony Powers:
Magic: Drain Heal & Lightning Magic [Both enhanced due to him being a pureblood.]
Abilities: When he gets at least a sip of blood; he unlocks hidden abilities and status increase [Ex: Applejack = Increase on Strength and Durability or Twilight = Increase on Magic Using and incredible intelligence.], When consuming blood within 2 weeks increases his status and power while buying more time before the deadline for the next meal (Rarely does this, unless needed absolutely or when he comes across criminals), increase on status and magic, able to walk into daylight (Pureblood), able to hide his true looks (Appearance changes: Eyes, teeth), etc.
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That is all of that. Anyway, if you wish to do that, you should my personality so I don't act out-of-character
Personality: Similar to Danny Phantom but 1 key difference. I get angry if annoyed too much, which is not a good thing due to my "Defense mechanism"/Dark Side.
Dark Side: Called itself "Darth Revan" (No copyright). He acts like a jerk and won't hesitate to kill the target. He is able to perform Dark Magic and can easily use the Dark Side and Universal Powers.
Besides that, that is all about me.
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Where have you been man? Beginning to think you left me with no reply.
5981746 Sorry. I have been busy but I have read your character's vampony bio. It is very interesting.
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Hey, its ok. 2 things I will ask/say, if you don't mind. 1) When are you planning to continue this story? And 2) don't mind the haters. If they hate this so much then they can stop reading the series. Those who like it, they keep going. Listen, its your story. If people hate the story then screw them, this is your story and no one is going to change that. YOU are the writer and author, THEY are the readers. Their opinion is theirs alone and you can't let that stop you. Keep to the story and I will read it. I love the story so far, don't stop it now because of haters. Also, 1 thing to ask. I'm finished up with Chapter 30 and was hoping before I do Chapter 31 or somewhere around there, I was hoping to add Charming Thunder into it. Do you mind if I do that? He's your character, not mine. I'll even add the love relationship between Charming Thunder & Twilight Sparkle.
5985482 I'm coming up with ideas on what happens next in the story. I am happy for you to add my character in your story.
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Ok and thank you.
5988958 Where in the timeline does your story take place for the Equestria Wars series? In between an episode to be exact. I wish to see your story.
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My story isn't exactly that. Its mostly a Danny Phantom and MLP Crossover with many other crossovers in it (Ex: Star Trek, Star Wars, Sonic the Hedgehog, Five Nights at Freddy's, etc.). I can send you a link if you want.
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Hey dude. I have made a Side Story, made by myself. I call it " Phantom War: Rise of the Consortium". Its about a side story after "Fall of the New Lunar Republic" when Danny came out of hiding, after he organized a small military force of Ponies, Droids, and Rogue Changelings. I have decided a replacement 2nd in command named: "King Metamorphosis", he was like chrysalis but male version and more of a military person than Chrysalis was. Plus, he is faithfully loyal to me and would die for my cause. Hope you like it, I JUST got started with it.
5993290 I'm sure I will once it is posted.
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Dude, where have you been?
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IMPORTANT MESSAGE AND NEED IMMEDIATE REPLY!!!
I plan to make a Death Battle between Danny Eclipse and Charming Thunder to see which brother is the greatest! I need to know Charming Thunder. His Likes, Dislikes, advantages, disadvantages, powers, skills in battle, weapons, armor, etc. If you need to make it out how to make it good, look up on Youtube "Screwattack" and look for the series "Death Battle". That should help you figure out how to make an intro on Charming Thunder
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Name: Charming Thunder
Height: Approx 5'
Two Time War Hero
King Of Harmony
Raised with Princess Cadence
Son of King Sombra
Married to Twilight Sparkle
Unicorn Spells:
Lightning
Magic Choke
Magic Blast
Teleport
Levitation Spell
Attributes:
Brave and Loyal
Preferred Weapons:
Lightsaber (red)
DL-44 heavy blaster pistol
Unicorn Magic
Abilities:
Immortality
Skilled with Lightsaber
Healing Factor
Strengths and Weaknesses:
Loss of Life in his Family
Guidance from King Sombra's Spirit
Had his Right Hoof Chopped Off by King Sombra
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That is all I have. The rest is up to you if you have read my fanfics.