Sunset Shimmer is tired of being alone despite her efforts to reform, so Pinkie Pie invites her to a slumber party with her friends. Despite the girls being more intimate than Sunset's used to, curiosity slowly gets the best of her as she's there.
Rainbow Dash rubbed her thigh assuredly.“Hey, don't sweat it.” “Nothing to be embarrassed about. At least you didn't fart when you finished.” She said, prompting a deadly silence to cling to the air around them. “... Rarity.”
I AM DEAD. THERE ARE TEARS STREAMING DOWN MY FACE.
The internet in my house was acting up again (damn thing). Made me click 'next chapter' several times before responding which made me skip this chapter altogether. I'm glad i rechecked because i was gonna flip tables left and right in my house if hadn't read the sexy scenes this chapter had to offer.
Great job, i guess you don't call yourself cloperella for nothing
The lack of comments is disturbing... but probably pretty reasonable. I mean, how much else is there to say? What COULD you say? It's just too well done!
The problem that plagued her mind still was that she had never had sex while she was in the world of Canterlot High, and had no idea how sex worked with the type of body she and the others had.
Had she had sex back in Equestria? She was pretty young when she made the transition, after all ... and Sunset Shimmer struck me as someone more into arcane knowledge and power than hedonism. She was, bascially, a more ruthless version of Twilight Sparkle.
5481561 She might simply not be aware of the anatomical differences. If she was the same kind of book smart as Twilight, she might have read up on the subject to see what the fuss was about. Plus a potential consideration of sex magic as a path to power.
This story reminds me of Godzilla 2014. The first act was great. The second act was cringe-inducing. And the final act was in the middle. STILL A HOT LESBIAN ORGY SCENE.
8690304 Sorry. Not one for specifics. Liked the heartfelt pov of sunset, but what I didn't like about the second chapter was the Dash-Pinkie-AJ intimate scene. I felt the same uncomfortableness as sunset did, but the end of the third chapter, with sunset finally being at peace after her incident in EQG, it made up for that. Sorry for not being specific earlier.
8690323 That's alright. Not really sure what you were expecting though, what with the rating of the story and the warning the characters give Sunset when they invite her. If that's something you're not into, I think there were plenty of signs telling you to turn back.
8690335 Yeah but to completely forget telling sunset that they were not going to do that just like that just a little unexpected. I expected them doing it to happen, but that complete disregard of their own warning kinda through me off this wagon. It was still a good story and still upvote worthy.
8690345 Ah, so you didn't like that they don't have perfect memories and got lost in the moment, even though they immediately apologized and stopped once they saw Sunset was uncomfortable. I see now.
8690356 *Chorus to Justin Bieber "Sorry" begins playing* Yes AJ, Dash, and Pinkie, It is too late to say sorry! You said you wouldn't do it, but you did it anyway! Wait a minute... Why am I still arguing? It was a really good story. Ima be quite. Btw, could we please have a sequel, but with Sci-Twi?
8690362 I'll think about it. I'm more into Zootopia as of late, and I'm also busy with bigger projects taking up a good deal of my time. If I do ever make an EQG story with Twilight, it'll most likely be sci-Twi instead of pony-human Twi.
You did the impossible here. You actually made an orgy of teenage girls endearing and sweet. I didn't know that was possible...
Well played... well played indeed...
I AM DEAD. THERE ARE TEARS STREAMING DOWN MY FACE.
The internet in my house was acting up again (damn thing). Made me click 'next chapter' several times before responding which made me skip this chapter altogether. I'm glad i rechecked because i was gonna flip tables left and right in my house if hadn't read the sexy scenes this chapter had to offer.
Great job, i guess you don't call yourself cloperella for nothing
Fluttershy?
A voyeur?
Oh you so scandalous.
The lack of comments is disturbing...
but probably pretty reasonable. I mean, how much else is there to say? What COULD you say? It's just too well done!
Damn, do you have any flaws? I'm jealous to hell and back.
Had she had sex back in Equestria? She was pretty young when she made the transition, after all ... and Sunset Shimmer struck me as someone more into arcane knowledge and power than hedonism. She was, bascially, a more ruthless version of Twilight Sparkle.
5481561 She might simply not be aware of the anatomical differences. If she was the same kind of book smart as Twilight, she might have read up on the subject to see what the fuss was about. Plus a potential consideration of sex magic as a path to power.
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Yes.
by? also, AJ's comment about bushes and trees made me laugh.
This story reminds me of Godzilla 2014. The first act was great. The second act was cringe-inducing. And the final act was in the middle. STILL A HOT LESBIAN ORGY SCENE.
8686879
Some specifics on what you disliked would be nice. But you're the commenter, not me.
8690207
Well actually I liked the fic. It was good and heartfelt, but the second chapter was just a little cringe inducing. Still have the like.
8690216
Right. I was asking for specifics, but I guess you're not wanting to delve into them. That's your choice.
8690304
Sorry. Not one for specifics. Liked the heartfelt pov of sunset, but what I didn't like about the second chapter was the Dash-Pinkie-AJ intimate scene. I felt the same uncomfortableness as sunset did, but the end of the third chapter, with sunset finally being at peace after her incident in EQG, it made up for that. Sorry for not being specific earlier.
8690323
That's alright. Not really sure what you were expecting though, what with the rating of the story and the warning the characters give Sunset when they invite her. If that's something you're not into, I think there were plenty of signs telling you to turn back.
8690335
Yeah but to completely forget telling sunset that they were not going to do that just like that just a little unexpected. I expected them doing it to happen, but that complete disregard of their own warning kinda through me off this wagon. It was still a good story and still upvote worthy.
8690345
Ah, so you didn't like that they don't have perfect memories and got lost in the moment, even though they immediately apologized and stopped once they saw Sunset was uncomfortable. I see now.
8690356
*Chorus to Justin Bieber "Sorry" begins playing*
Yes AJ, Dash, and Pinkie, It is too late to say sorry! You said you wouldn't do it, but you did it anyway!
Wait a minute... Why am I still arguing? It was a really good story. Ima be quite.
Btw, could we please have a sequel, but with Sci-Twi?
8690362
I'll think about it. I'm more into Zootopia as of late, and I'm also busy with bigger projects taking up a good deal of my time. If I do ever make an EQG story with Twilight, it'll most likely be sci-Twi instead of pony-human Twi.
8690370
Well Sci-Twi was who I meant, but hey let me know if you decide to make a sequel.
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Not seeing anything.
i hop we can see more of this or a new chapter this is very good i love your work cloperella i hop we do a new chapter to this story 🤣