Before Shining Armor can claim the coveted title of Captain of the Royal Guard, he must pass an initiation test. Be Princess Luna's guard. What seemed like a boring assignment at first soon becomes a bit more interesting. Especially in the dark.
I like this Luna (minor nitpick: I've always understood "thine" to be used in front of a noun starting with a vowel, so I think you want "thy" in most of these cases). A couple other grammatical hiccups, but not bad so far.
... What has Luna been eating for the past thousand years? I just thought that and with the weight lifting thing all I can think is that she should be incredibly emaciated XD I assume Moon rocks are very nutritious.
Bro. Never assume you are in better shape than the one who literally wrote the training manual.
Luna isn't alabaster? Good! Nice to see some variety in her skin tone for once.
5469972 That would be Celestia. Alabaster is white.
I like this Luna (minor nitpick: I've always understood "thine" to be used in front of a noun starting with a vowel, so I think you want "thy" in most of these cases). A couple other grammatical hiccups, but not bad so far.
May want to put the word use in there somewhere.
Great story so far though. Been some time since a chapter had me laughing at the end.
... What has Luna been eating for the past thousand years? I just thought that and with the weight lifting thing all I can think is that she should be incredibly emaciated XD I assume Moon rocks are very nutritious.
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Wallace and Gromit states the moon is made of cheese :)