5638248 You totally have to do that wincest orgy. You've titillated my appetite just by mentioning it, so please don't hold out. Also, FINALLY comes the Prism and Dubz chapter. That's one I'd been looking forward to for quite some time. I see Ebony Stallion requested it, but I'm unsure if you're open to hearing out other ideas that might be cool to add to your story.
I was surprised that you actually deviated a bit from the origin story of that scar and Prism and Dubz's break up. That part I didn't see coming.
I loved the sex, though I found it...odd, what with the conversation they had while Whirlwind was riding him. I reckon that she would have trouble keeping up dialogue.
And I felt you had Prism blame himself a little too much throughout the chapter.
But aside from that, this chapter was still exemplary. And I look forward to more.
5651001 Well Kilala said that the origin of his scar is still open to our imagination, while she did create an origin story for it, she did say that it wasn't necessarily canon. And given that he's been seen as a jerk from time to time, Blck-Dynomite decided to have him go through a combination of what Lightning Dust did and what his mother realized from her actions.
5650957 I am open to suggestions, since Blck-Dynomite knows eventually he's going to run out of different ways to mix it up. Hence the Suggestion Box. But whether or not I actually go through with them is both dependent on my skill and if I think I can execute the chapter.
5651135 Blck-Dynomite should not deviate from his third person way of speaking! In all seriousness though, you write these chapters exceptionally well. You don't lack the skill, and if the time comes to get into some more unique pairings, I'm sure you'll be able to think of some convoluted way to make it work. I've got faith in you!
The tag you put said incest in it. Why hasn't been any yet besides the second chapter. Like put in a Crystal Clarity x Turquoise Blitz and/or Red June x Golden Delicious.
.....a long life knowing that everypony you cared for, loved, and made friends with, were all going to drop dead around you eventually, while ponies like Turquoise, Claire, Illusion, Nidra, T’s father, Nidra’s mother, and even Illusion’s mother and father, would still be alive.
ok not to be a hater, but am I the only one that thinks that Twilight is immortal; Ok so granted, she didn't start off as an alicorn, but neither did princess cadence (for those of ya'll that read the comics, ya'll should know this) and everyone thinks that she's immortal.
It's not a huge deal granted, but it just seems that Twilight's immortality would be more of an open topic.
*stands up and applauds wildly* BRAVO, BRAVO!!! Loved it, loved every single second of it! Ever since this story started I've been waiting for a PrismWind chapter!!
20 Years into the present:
Raine: *closes her father's old diary with a MASSIVE blush on her face* "Well...there's a side of my mom I DIDN'T need to know about..."
5651342 Blck-Dynomite was waiting till he got his feet wet and that feedback on his fic was at a good enough point to venture into forbidden territory. And havin' Kilala' stamp of approval didn't hurt either. So hold your horses their coming.
5651421 Blck-Dynomite is only follwin' the canon of the Kilalaverse, in which alicorns that weren't naturally born are not immortal, take it up with Kilala.
5652893 Thanks to recent pics from Kilala, Blck-Dynomite is contemplating something for those two, and Blck-Dynomte's happy that you enjoyed the chapter.
5638248
You totally have to do that wincest orgy. You've titillated my appetite just by mentioning it, so please don't hold out. Also, FINALLY comes the Prism and Dubz chapter. That's one I'd been looking forward to for quite some time. I see Ebony Stallion requested it, but I'm unsure if you're open to hearing out other ideas that might be cool to add to your story.
~SolidFire
This was a chapter well done.
I was surprised that you actually deviated a bit from the origin story of that scar and Prism and Dubz's break up. That part I didn't see coming.
I loved the sex, though I found it...odd, what with the conversation they had while Whirlwind was riding him. I reckon that she would have trouble keeping up dialogue.
And I felt you had Prism blame himself a little too much throughout the chapter.
But aside from that, this chapter was still exemplary. And I look forward to more.
5651001 Well Kilala said that the origin of his scar is still open to our imagination, while she did create an origin story for it, she did say that it wasn't necessarily canon. And given that he's been seen as a jerk from time to time, Blck-Dynomite decided to have him go through a combination of what Lightning Dust did and what his mother realized from her actions.
5650957 I am open to suggestions, since Blck-Dynomite knows eventually he's going to run out of different ways to mix it up. Hence the Suggestion Box. But whether or not I actually go through with them is both dependent on my skill and if I think I can execute the chapter.
5651135
Blck-Dynomite should not deviate from his third person way of speaking! In all seriousness though, you write these chapters exceptionally well. You don't lack the skill, and if the time comes to get into some more unique pairings, I'm sure you'll be able to think of some convoluted way to make it work. I've got faith in you!
~SolidFire
The tag you put said incest in it. Why hasn't been any yet besides the second chapter. Like put in a Crystal Clarity x Turquoise Blitz and/or Red June x Golden Delicious.
ok not to be a hater, but am I the only one that thinks that Twilight is immortal; Ok so granted, she didn't start off as an alicorn, but neither did princess cadence (for those of ya'll that read the comics, ya'll should know this) and everyone thinks that she's immortal.
It's not a huge deal granted, but it just seems that Twilight's immortality would be more of an open topic.
*stands up and applauds wildly* BRAVO, BRAVO!!! Loved it, loved every single second of it! Ever since this story started I've been waiting for a PrismWind chapter!!
20 Years into the present:
Raine: *closes her father's old diary with a MASSIVE blush on her face* "Well...there's a side of my mom I DIDN'T need to know about..."
I did not expect a whirlwind/prism chapter to be this good. Amazing actually, keep like this and I can't wait for the next one.
still waiting for a human cotton candy one since she's the most voluptuous of all the next gen (right behind June)
5651342 Blck-Dynomite was waiting till he got his feet wet and that feedback on his fic was at a good enough point to venture into forbidden territory. And havin' Kilala' stamp of approval didn't hurt either. So hold your horses their coming.
5651421 Blck-Dynomite is only follwin' the canon of the Kilalaverse, in which alicorns that weren't naturally born are not immortal, take it up with Kilala.
5652893 Thanks to recent pics from Kilala, Blck-Dynomite is contemplating something for those two, and Blck-Dynomte's happy that you enjoyed the chapter.
5651813 Glad you like it, Blck-Dynomite tries.