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This story has shifted from depressing to downright terrifying since the Interludes. The quote at the top is certainly relevant, because this really does feel like it was written in the style of a Lovecraftian horror. If the visions in the dreams really are reflections of what has happened in other worlds, then Equestria is in for one hell of a ride. But maybe such high stakes are what it'll have to take to bring Luna and Celestia back to being loving sisters again.
That cliffhanger at the end was just cruel though. Waiting for the next chapter is going to be pretty tough, to say the least.
A big bad showing up now seems to be a little out of the left field there, I trust you so I will withhold judgement until next chapter.
The imagery is sill very well done make no doubt, just seems a little strange considering the rest of the story.
I not expect this turn of story, but this is still beter the quick reunite both alicorn sisters.( Too fast and boring). Obviously Celestia cant handle this treat alone,she so weak inside now . Absalom is too strong for this. And she need cooperate with Luna or, ever all Equestrians, to sold this problem.
I expect the next chapter for Celestia*s POV.
Sry for bad english.Maybe this dream monster thingie is a bit too much? I think Celestias dream machine thingie was enough and that with this new monster the story is being pulled too much away from the real problem... I think Tia's madness was enough, but I'm still going to read the next chapters.. So keep up the good work and sorry for my terrible English!
Aaaand you lost me with this weird monster thing, I'm out.
Reading this in the dark at, like, 2:00 am really got to me. I all but started to hear it, myself.
I am now questioning many things, if that was your intention... then good job.