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I've been waiting for Celestia to finally break down for real pretty much since chapter one, and you teased it so many times! Let me tell you it was pulled off to perfection, Whole chapter had me tearing up. I would have been content with it ending here but I am certainly glad its not, hopefully you wont have me waiting so long for the next one this time.
- I think maybe you meant courtier here. Or perhaps not
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Guesstimate 2 weeks.
I like that Celestia's ghosts are still here, I thought they would be gone after the last chapter. In many ways, they were what kept her from becoming completely hollow and emotionless. Ironically, it was the hallucinations that sustained a bit of her sanity over the thousand years, by bringing her guilt to light. But now, with Luna back, and everypony trying their best to be there for her, they're a mental strain of regretful memories that Celestia will have to let go of. Until she forgives herself, anything Luna or anypony else does to help will be in vain.
Wow. This is a powerful story and I'm honestly not sure how the cannon Celestia is still sane after all she's Ben threw.
Absolutely love the lovecraftien/MLP you've rested here.
Very...intense. Strong feelings-I like this chapter.
I really enjoyed reading this story up to here, so thanks for writing it.
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Or... you were talking about Rooke's physical appearance. Sorry, I misunderstood.
As far as my mental image goes, a build like a taller Fluer De Lis. Coal-black coat (very rare in ponies) with a grey mane and soft brown eyes behind oversized glasses. Noble blooded and carries herself as such, with the accompanying tendency to arch her nose at those beneath her. But beneath the trained arrogance is a playful heart, manifesting itself with those she considers close.
An incredibly powerful image.
But not too old.
But not too weak.
But not too mad.