Don't let the marble and gem encrusted streets of Canterlot fool you. It's a city filled with secrets. In Folklore's first job for the Equestrian Government he sees the truth of the world, a truth forgotten in the name of harmony.
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The new stuff started.
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That's weird. It isn't supposed to look like that.
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Seems that due to a temporary loss of internet a small part of my Google Docs wasn't saved, I'm going to have to rewrite that from memory.
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Welp. Fixed it I guess. I honestly jump the gun because of all of my obligations, my bad time management skills, and the fact that once I actually am done it is hard to find my editors and prereaders. I improvise, adapt, overcome. I push it out of the door, and deal with it later.
Essentially insanity.
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A review came in about pacing and other mistakes, I fixed them and also divided up the chapters into more.
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If you are calling me a plagiarist, I pay Straighttothepointstudio five bucks a month to read the story in a bid to advertise myself indirectly. He is also a friend. I asked him to read the story. I am the WRITER!
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Then you’d be the exception >.>
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Oh? Really? Doesn't anyone read the video descriptions? That they are requests. Is there a person copying stories somewhere? And if I was wrong in my guesses, why did you post StraightToThePointStudio's video?
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Wasn’t my video, and sorry about that >.>
Great story 👍
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Thank you!
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Cool, but I meant the real-life dagger...
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OH you mean the picture, it is a fan prop of this thing made by a blacksmith.
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It appear in Witchfinder: In the Service of Angels by Mike Mignola, part of the Hellboy Universe.
Some minor critiques: I can't see why they'd call it a "handkerchief" when ponies don't have hands. And I'm a bit confused as to the reasoning behind the title of "Blueblood Hunting," since Blueblood doesn't appear in that chapter and they don't hunt him...unless you mean the bluebloods as in the Thule Society members that they've agreed to find and kill.
And I'm going to assume that Folklore's little rant on the nature of Hastur is him being possessed or something because...people don't talk like that in real life. Not to mention it seemed completely out of character for him.
On a similar note, while that monologue was a treat for those of us familiar with the expanded Mythos, I doubt that anyone who isn't a Cthulhu nerd like us would understand most of that. I'm not saying that you should get rid of it, just that you might want to bear in mind that it could be some accidental gatekeeping.
That being said, you kept the "you made me bleed my sexy blood!" line, so I forgive you.
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Actually, he had a traumatic episode remembering what he saw during the Clairvoyance Ritual he used on Octavia at the start of the story, he learned a ton about the truth of Hastur minus his name in those moments, practically like the information flooded into his mind breaking it a little bit more. He has had almost a decades worth of PTSD therapy ever since he returned from the Gallic-Sheba War, encountering Cosmic Horrors for the first time is making him relapse, and as a Magician of his experience and ability he is more susceptible to the subtle brainwashing that is known of Hastur by his targeting of individuals with intelligence and creativity.
He has known of Demons, Mutants, Fairies, Mad Science, and the various monsters of folklore in North East Equestria, Zebrica, and Europa. Not to mention Ghosts of all kinds.
While he has gotten slight glimpses of the Lovecratian throughout his life, now with the return of Princess Luna he is seeing that shit unfold and getting a front row seat.
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And yes it refers to the Thule Society.
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Damn, man, leave some stuff for me to find out later! You're spoiling me!
...was doing that to Merry really necessary?
I know you're not holding back on us, but that felt...I dunno. Over the top.
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I got rid of some of the details, changed it up a bit.