Don't let the marble and gem encrusted streets of Canterlot fool you. It's a city filled with secrets. In Folklore's first job for the Equestrian Government he sees the truth of the world, a truth forgotten in the name of harmony.
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All right. Finishing off the last chapter. Which will be the new one.
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On second thought you may have to wait until tomorrow.
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You can be as hostile as you want in private messages if you wish. I know this seems like the most bullshit move ever. But it was done in response to a review and the suggestion of a couple of friends of mine LyraAlluse and Grant.
In all, I basically got a massive hit to my pride. And I instantly reacted like an idiot trying to stop a flood by using a piece of gum to patch a dam.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213901/my-little-reviews-feedback/thread/410183/review-the-symphony-of-canterlot-by-disavowed-ash
It was right but the problem is that basically, I am a terrible writer, writing a relatively good story, that doesn't know how people actually speak, and that what I write is too hard to read. My chapters are too long. And apparently, there is no doubt that the character can solve the mystery, and that it doesn't scare him because the main investigator is closer to Solomon Cane and Conan (Adventure sides of the Cthulhu Mythos that are actually part of the Cthulhu Mythos) instead of the usual sniveling Massachusetts Reclusive Academic that is as weak as he is cowardly.
Basically any dreams I might have of becoming an actual author with original novels and short stories have been thrown under the bus. And my dreams have been crushed.
It's a shame that writing was the last thing I had too. I mean in order to go back to college I need a loan that I will have to pay for the rest of my life. I am a failure of a university student. And I had three nervous breakdowns working in a Call Center for a Bank that charges Insufficient Funds Fees.
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Chapter 25: The Dead and the Damned which hasn't been posted yet. I'm working on it now.