You are a Diamond Dog living in Canterlot after a cave-related incident. Princess Luna is... Princess Luna. Will the two of you have more in common than you think?
Well, that's certainly one way to make a first impression. And several more beyond that. I do hope one of them picks up those books before Twilight next visits her old apartment, or she is going to be downright incandescent.
so far so good.
"Fight! Fight like gentlestallions, without malice; for fighting is the best game in the world, and love the second best!"
Liking this so far. You should probably add the 2nd person tag to this, though.
Well, that's certainly one way to make a first impression. And several more beyond that. I do hope one of them picks up those books before Twilight next visits her old apartment, or she is going to be downright incandescent.
Nice chapter, but I found a minor thing you may want to edit.
I'm pretty sure that should be "then".
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This story is a hidden gem.
My complements to the author.
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Aw geez, it's far from over, too!
I gotta get back into the writing groove. :P
Such sass. I love the protagonist already.
That is a rear end to worship all day and night.
I hope she finds out soon, and that she enjoys it very much.
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Technically, in second person, the reader IS the protagonist.