Life has a way of throwing unexpected twists and turns, one thing you never expected was being the adopted son of a sun goddess of a different universe. Boy, life sure does love screwing with you. [Remake of Teenagers]
I like how Dante ended up in Equestria in this story better than in the last. I'm starting to notice an increase in errors though. Is something the matter?
It was probably best that this, which is essentially a prologue, came after the first chapter. In fact, the first chapter did such a great job of setting everything up that this seems kind of unnecessary. It might have been better for Franklin to tell Dante this story much later down the line, but that's just my opinion. This is your story. Keep up the good work.
Nice chapter.
And that friends is how I meet my mother I imagine Dante telling his friends when they ask how did he meet Celestia
I like how Dante ended up in Equestria in this story better than in the last. I'm starting to notice an increase in errors though. Is something the matter?
5249760 me not checking things before posting
i like it
stay classy
Always with the goddamn flashbacks for Christs sake.
5618696 nice pic Alex mercer
It was probably best that this, which is essentially a prologue, came after the first chapter. In fact, the first chapter did such a great job of setting everything up that this seems kind of unnecessary. It might have been better for Franklin to tell Dante this story much later down the line, but that's just my opinion. This is your story. Keep up the good work.