Life has a way of throwing unexpected twists and turns, one thing you never expected was being the adopted son of a sun goddess of a different universe. Boy, life sure does love screwing with you. [Remake of Teenagers]
so i like this story, the spirit world stuff is hard to follow at times. but it's interesting to see how the interactions between the spirit world and the normal world play out for donte
this is really an interesting story but it's very clearly a devil may cry ripoff/crossover. things could definitely be worded better than they were in here. if you ever need a proofreader i'll do it for you.
5283023 not one hundred percent a devil may cry crossover ripoff or whatever. There will be references about different games and franchise and even music
Ah yes, a fashion emergency, well sorry sir, but I have an ACTUAL WORLD ENDING LIFE THREATENING, PONIES DYING, FIRE RAINING FROM THE SKY, ETERNAL DAMNATION OF NIGHT EMERGENCY GET THE FUCK OUTA THE WAY YOU PUSSY
Interesting new take on things. Unfortunately, with Dante staying as sheriff, how is he going to be able to keep up with his princely duties? He's already on thin ice with Celestia. Now, I see the reason for the Spa Sisters character tags. Spirit deputies? Interesting. I have to ask, does Luna know of the spirit world? I would be shocked if she didn't. Her being Princess of the Night and all. I also look forward to seeing who Diamond Tiara's and Screwball's character tags come into play. Finally, I'm glad to see Lola mentioned. Is she going to become Dante's pet again?
5293675 That's good to know. At least, Dante's aunt will be able to find out that he's the sheriff. I hope we find out how come Celestia can't/doesn't know about the spirit realm, though.
so i like this story, the spirit world stuff is hard to follow at times. but it's interesting to see how the interactions between the spirit world and the normal world play out for donte
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stay classy
Love this chapter.
5280615 yeah I'll try to clear things up more when he actually enters the spirit world
this is really an interesting story but it's very clearly a devil may cry ripoff/crossover. things could definitely be worded better than they were in here. if you ever need a proofreader i'll do it for you.
5283023 not one hundred percent a devil may cry crossover ripoff or whatever. There will be references about different games and franchise and even music
Ah yes, a fashion emergency, well sorry sir, but I have an ACTUAL WORLD ENDING LIFE THREATENING, PONIES DYING, FIRE RAINING FROM THE SKY,
ETERNAL DAMNATION OF NIGHT EMERGENCY
GET THE FUCK OUTA THE WAY YOU PUSSY
So, THIS is the remaked version of "Teenagers"/"Vices and Virtues"?
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…yes
Interesting new take on things. Unfortunately, with Dante staying as sheriff, how is he going to be able to keep up with his princely duties? He's already on thin ice with Celestia. Now, I see the reason for the Spa Sisters character tags. Spirit deputies? Interesting. I have to ask, does Luna know of the spirit world? I would be shocked if she didn't. Her being Princess of the Night and all. I also look forward to seeing who Diamond Tiara's and Screwball's character tags come into play. Finally, I'm glad to see Lola mentioned. Is she going to become Dante's pet again?
5292562 of course Luna would know about the spiritual realm it would be ridiculous if she didn't.
5293675 That's good to know. At least, Dante's aunt will be able to find out that he's the sheriff. I hope we find out how come Celestia can't/doesn't know about the spirit realm, though.
Aww and I wanted to see what happens next *sigh* I guess I will have to wait
A few minutes later...
You are going to get stabbed
And a spineless wimp-ass to boot, yeah I think I'm done here.