Kamina is dead, has been for years. After watching Simon's struggles, and his ultimate victory, perhaps now Kamina can let go. But his will is unbreakable, so it might take a little intervention. Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann Crossover.
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This chapter was amazing. The guys and the Mane 6 get greater distinction than before. Game becomes a father of 24 foals and gets all but one adopted while he and Pinkie raises them. The action scene was kickass with the MLP version of the GL. Spike demonstrated character development by being the most noble of the four warriors despite being the most headstrong about fighting Discord in the previous chapters. Aminak's formation was heartwarming, weird (twincest is weird given that I'm a twin), and funny (love Trixie/Zecora's support for twincest). The best part, however, is the love triangle between Celestia, Luna, and Scoddri as I enjoyed watching him be uncomfortable about Celestia's obvious attraction to him and Luna's desire for a father figure for her daughter. I also liked what you did about Harmonia forming the Harmony Box in this season rather than season 4 and the existence of a black box. This has become my favorite chapter yet. Forgot to ask something, have Celestia and Luna ever slept with each other? Celestia has hinted that she and Luna kissed when they were younger due to their opposing Shifter elements...and now they have Scoddri to impress and given how his Kamina's mares support twincest, I think that Scoddri could tolerate Princest. I feel dirty by asking this question.
5344951 Ah, moony, just who I needed to hear from. Yes, to all that; you got it. Princest is canon in this AU, and I felt it would have been stupid not to have some negative backlash from all of this, so thus the foals. Also, I figured this was the perfect moment for Animak to gain his own body; while they're so flush with Spiral Power it's crazy.
Also, just so you all know: you DO realize that they were already just one step away from Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann right? Do you all realize, that they were THIS close to forming the MLP version of TTGL?
Forgot to add that I wish to see more of Scoddri, Celestia, and Luna's love triangle.
5344973 Will do, whenever any of the three are due for an appearance.
When I first saw this story, I was as happy as could be; Kamina in Equestria, how couldn't I like that? Now though, I'm not going to say I hate it, it's a decent story, but... If anything I'm disappointed. I was disappointed at the first hints of him making a herd. Then he was able to shapeshift, then he got a split personalty (thing), then he became an alicorn and then you kept adding on top of that; Fire Twilight, Water Trixie, Kirin Spike, and so on.
Usually I'd be fine with most of these things but when they're all combined together it becomes... Boring, predictable. I'm fine with a Gary Stu character as long as the author can keep it interesting but I reached my limit for this story.
I hope you have luck in any future endeavours , Goodbye.
Wow. So now there are two Kamina's. Should we be worried?
Climatic battle with the antispiral, a clash of tauric and serpentine powers, ending in an offering of friendship. Nice how you brought the antispiral around in a manner that doesn't unmake who he is and what he stands for, yet curbs away the onmicidal parts that make him an extremist. Over the top and fitting for this crossover. Makes me wonder what's gonna happen when Tirek comes around.
Nice to see Animak has his own set of legs now. And poor Game, father of two dozen (so help my unicorn nobles, if you warp those innocent little crystaline minds...). Also; it's about time the girls(+Blitz) got recognition for their hard work in protecting Equestria and the world.
Nice throw away though. "Ah, Equestria's dealing with another world ending catastrophe for us. Glorious!"
Now that was just plain awesome. Looks like everyone got their dues, even the two halfs of Discord. I'm honestly surprised that even with all the mentioning of sex that their isn't one clop scene, even more surprised is that I don't mind. Though I wouldn't mind seeing Spike has some fun with Rarity's new found fetish.
Introduce some Characters from the original show who died maybe?
just a suggestion for more character development.
great chapter this is rising into some of the best in my books. Still not nuber one it feel a little rushed oveer all but with a story like this it dose not take to much away from it.
i think it be cool if like kitan and viral came or just viral like old viral like stayed on earth till its destruction sort of viral but yh
5345017 Understood. Oh well. Goodbye, it was nice to get a comment from you anyway.
5345047 Yes
5345081 "What? Another world-ending catastrophe? .... Oh~! It's in Equestria? Forget about it; let them handle it." XD
5346697 Awesome. So, how soon until we are all doomed?
5345126 Yeah, I know, I'm just uncomfortable with the idea of writing full-out clop, because I'm worried I won't be able to stop myself from degenerating into it during my normal work.
Smexy sex stories are all well and good, but I prefer a good tease. I find it better to mention it than to outright focus on it, because then it adds to the story while not taking away from it.
5345131 I was considering it, but like Kamina; those guys died for the others, but unlike Kamina; they died without regret. Or at least far less than him. And they've moved on unlike he didn't, so bringing a dead character in is impossible.
A Living one though...he, he, he....
5346097 The rushed feeling is intentional. You do realize they only JUST made it in time to save Appleloosa before Discordant started down the path of no return? This was a race against time as much as it was a final confrontation with Discordant.
5346703 About one more season
5346746 Ah. Kind of can't wait to see how you manage it. Then again... If you stretched to another season beyond that, you could potentially screw with Tirek.
5346780 Pfft, that wannabe? He's nothing compared to the TRUE Tirek of G1. That badmutha was a REAL villain. Sure, this Tirek was bad, but G1 bad? Nope.
And I aim to fix that.
5346832 Nice. Wonder how either one would react to spiral power. After all, it is basically an infinite source of power that constantly changes. Plus the whole creating matter out of potential thing could prove to be very difficult to try and contain. Then again, it is basically biological potential brought up to the forefront of conscious thought.
5346878 Which is really why Animak gained his own body, he subconciously created it while undoing their transformation into Gurren Lagann, because he could not fully comprehend all that matter simply disappearing, and so some of it went somewhere.
5346889 Hmmm... So, he shares in Kamina's near limitless potential, with the only counter being his own largely unfettered will. Which opens up a couple possibilities for both Kamina and Animak. Namely, developing new sub-personalities to both obey their physical will, and their personal desires, even if they happen to act against each other from an outside view point. Or they could simply continue acting as each other's counter point via the psychic link.
GameJunkie7, you're shoving ridiculous amounts of insanity and stupid shit into this story. I love it, keep up the crazy wack fun.