5176480 I think the reason for so many downvotes is because everybody's favorite pony Twilight is surprisingly OoC (That's 'Out of Character' for everyone not in the know.)
wow , surprising how much of a turn off the aspect of a human being the pet in this kind of fic is for me , if it had been the other way around or even no human at all im sure i would have at least liked this somewhat....
but as for where the story's going right now , where is it going? is it going at all? what's with the sudden half assed attempts to bring some kind of emotional element into it at the very end here?........
5195318 for the most part I thought a human being a pet would be a good little twist on to something different. As for where it's going that's a surprise ;) what I will say is I did have it at the end because I kind of figured might as well make a ending
thank you for making me feel guilty about hating Luna i was all set to say that i would rather have Celestia kill me rather than stay Luna's pet then you throw this curveball now i feel guilty about wrongly judging Luna thank you for correcting my train of thought i look foreward now more than ever to your next chapter. BTW Twilight is a witch with a B if you get my drift
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if he hurts Luna, well just say, heeeeere's johny!
I do hope you keep this story going . And don't let the down votes get to ya
5176480 I think the reason for so many downvotes is because everybody's favorite pony Twilight is surprisingly OoC (That's 'Out of Character' for everyone not in the know.)
5176595 hmmm I see that point maybe an AU tag is in order so people know that this isn't canon to twilight's normal personality
5176770 Ah yes, pardon my neglectfulness.
5176770 And let's not forget that Jake has not yet been able to say one word about how he's been treated.
Wow
Why mods? Why you let this get posted?
Why is this entertaining?
wow , surprising how much of a turn off the aspect of a human being the pet in this kind of fic is for me , if it had been the other way around or even no human at all im sure i would have at least liked this somewhat....
but as for where the story's going right now , where is it going? is it going at all? what's with the sudden half assed attempts to bring some kind of emotional element into it at the very end here?........
5195318 for the most part I thought a human being a pet would be a good little twist on to something different. As for where it's going that's a surprise ;) what I will say is I did have it at the end because I kind of figured might as well make a ending
thank you for making me feel guilty about hating Luna i was all set to say that i would rather have Celestia kill me rather than stay Luna's pet then you throw this curveball now i feel guilty about wrongly judging Luna thank you for correcting my train of thought i look foreward now more than ever to your next chapter. BTW Twilight is a witch with a B if you get my drift
Right now stab luna trough her neck and whatch her drown in her own blood
Nextra chapter.please
5369749 it is coming shortly :) I'm very glad you like it
Update?
Update?