I'm liking how the story is proceeding. The pacing is fairly good along with starting in medias rea.

My only complaint is the grammar and spelling. It's rife in this story. I'd recommend getting an editor or two to help out. Many people on this site want to help authors edit. All you need to do is ask.

Nice story you goos sir have earned a follower

may need a dark tag kind of got a little demented for a moment but all and all liked itkeep it up or this may happen to you HAHAHAHA

I'd love to see more of this because I think this is hot as heck. I have always been into the pet/master stuff especially when it comes to Luna and a human. It's hard to find good five like yours man. Keep up the good work.

So many grammatical errors its not even funny.

I hope he gets out and get to have a little pay back and show luna why humans are superior

That poor boy, that is rape, kidnapping, and misuse of magic. She should be executed for this, all I need to do is capture her...

She is worse than nightmare moon