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Lucky Bolt. X3 I bet Ruby is really happy right now ^.^
5717414 Yes, she is. But she has to spit him out, which won't be a pleasant experience.
Ok problem... how is he breathing? even if she did swallow air with him their shouldn't be enough to breath let alone talk. I kind of assumed she would use a SCUBA spell or some such. I assume his drowsiness relates to some secretion ment to incapacitate her prey, but really the asphyxiation usually takes care of that. Unless he is suffering from carbon dioxide poisoning in which I don't think letting him fall asleep is a good idea.
5718655 I think, in terms of lore, lamias have simply developed a tactic naturally in their body that could simply allow oxygen to be absorbed into their body, because Ruby's mouth alone could not provide the necessary air since it would take too long to get around and be used up halfway to the second set of lungs, you know.
However, what you said, it likely would apply in the main digestion stomach, whilst the first is probably just full of some sort of natural drowsiness gas... Or Bolt is just that relaxed and lazy which is a possibility, he is me in pony form! XD
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lol ok so vistigial stomach serves what purpose? Fridge for prey to teach young to hunt? I could buy that supplying air to potential victims as a function worth having if that was the case. Otherwise developing such a trait to satiate a vore fetish doesn't make sense.
Sorry one of my peeves in stories is when authors pull random biological functions out of their butt without considering the evolutionary reasons for such adaptation. I don't even care if the reasons would be successful or not, or if the author even mentions it. Mostly because I love coming to the conclusion based on clues left in the story. So if I ask don't think that it's some big error that needs to be changed, just me trying to satisfy my need to know.
5720413 Nah that's perfectly okay, it's interaction really.
As for it's use, the second stomach, as mentioned, is MUCH smaller and very slow working. In the first stomach another gas with slow the victims rate of... Well decomposition I suppose. It's like they are in stasis waiting to be digested so more meals last longer. At least that's what I would say if I had to make it predatory and actually biological, some people can probably do better but hopefully this will satisfy you! :)
If not, sorry! XD
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well at least there is something to go off of. Such an adaptation would be folly in anything less than a magical creature. One of the main weakness of a snake or a bird that has had a big meal is they become unable to defend themselves against enemies, so they regurgitate their meals to be able to escape. So making meals last longer doesn't make all that much sense. Unless MAGIC! (An often times over used deus ex machina that if abused can grate on the suspension of disbelief, for me personally this story is not quite BS level) So like my fridge theory, a creature like Lamias would not have been able to find a steady supply of food, going weeks between meals. But when food is found its usually in groups of small creatures. Thus allowing the Lamia to make a meal last longer. But without a means of subduing a subject inside the vistigial stomach this strategy is very dangerous. Having a living creature inside of you is horribly dangerous all it takes is a free horn or claw and your victims have direct access to your internal organs. That was why the theory of the sleep agent.
5721534 ...*top of my head just explodes and I fall backwards*
Now I'm confused! XD
Well I tried to be scientific, failed and I ain't picking up the chemistry again! XD But I'm not changing it I like it this way.
Also: Wow... Do you work at nasa or something? XD
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nope I'm a security guard that likes to watch nature shows, lol. My point is that biology does not waste effort, it doesn't create something for no reason. And while an organ, or limb may become vistigial, it at one time had a purpose. Like the reason cows have 4 stomach is because grass is a bitch to get nutrients from. And even after the second and third pass it's not fully broken down. Meanwhile I see in your story an intriguing concept, a snake person with multiple organs, including stomach, my intrest is piqued. Why would they need such an adaptation, besides the obvious desire for Vore fantasy. At first I kind of pictured it like a crop (bird anatomy) but lower down the digestive tract. Some birds (and some dinosaurs were theorized as well) store stones in here to help crush their food since they lack teeth. It was also a place to keep food to feed its young. All these potential explications and theories spun in my head, but in the end it was just to prolong the feeling of being well fed. *
To say it was kind of a let down... well that on me,as far as magical creatures are concerned anything goes really. I'm at least happy to hear some consideration was given to its purpose.*PS: after reading your discription again, I am satisfied with the explanation you gave. At the time of my last posting I thought the purpose was to keep the victim alive, I realized that assumptions was in error. As it is I'd say seems legit.
5721679 Glad I piped your interest, and whilst the theory I told you was just a personal one I'm glad you liked it. :)
5731063 Thanks, glad you liked it! :)
Very good story! The plot is well worked, the characters are well described and the background is well put in place. I wait for more!
5817249 Thanks, glad you like it so much! :)
Will try to get another chapter out soon, but I'm doing a random little short story which will likely come out first, sorry about that.
5851808 Cheers, I thought it was actually cliché but I'm glad peopled found it funny. :)
can't wait for the next part
btw you created some nice carcters and a great story oh and the great species of lamia!
and your writing has realy improoved since chapter 1
i just read all other lamia stories you have made
it's been a while since the last chapter please we beg you we want more
plz i'm i think i'm going mad like this:
ps. do not take the going mad part literly thank you
5855878 HELP! THIS MAN IS CRAZY BRING A STRAIGHT JACKET! HELP!
XD Glad you liked it so much, reason it's taken so long is mainly cause of the Vinyl story... And the fact I've re-written the current chapter four times... It probably won't be my best but hopefully it will do what it's meant to.
Also, glad to know I am improving, even a little. :)
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Alright, there's something here I really don't understand. Scale.
Ruby's top half is pony-like, close enough that she can pass as a pony if she keeps her back half hidden.
This implies a size for her mouth and throat. Even with a snake-like unhinging, how can she manage to swallow a pony-sized object?
Next, her "holding stomach" -- big enough for a full grown pony to move around in? And she is still able to spit that stomach out?
At first I thought she would be using teleport magic to bring Bolt back out. Not throwing up her stomach.
And ... Trying to make sure that when she does eject him, it's either cleanly head first, or cleanly tail first, without any risk of chopping him in half by accidentally going side first.
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For the amount Ruby can eat, Bolt is comfortably within her range, snake's can stretch their mouths several times the size of their head (I know, I own one) with ease and so can Ruby.
The holding stomach does allow movement, but it's not like a cave or empty space, it's meant to be that the walls are soft and palpable enough that you can push and move around against them but with difficulty and restrictions on movements, but it'd still be slightly free (this is just so prey can struggle for more vore fetish inclined people like myself :3)
Yeah, I do agree this bit is a bit unrealistic, the stomach thing, but I did my best to base it on how a snake normally spits out it's food, which is tensing up their walls to push them along so, in theory, it would just be in reverse from how a pony went in since the walls would be clenching in on all sides, I ask for a little lenience here as we are talking about a magic pony snake horse eating a pegasus in a fictional setting, but if you know a way to describe it more clearly I'd be willing to listen.