Chapters in a day is an exception, not a rule. Especially as my standard rule is that I never release a chapter until I have the next done and being edited. When inspiration comes, though, you just sorta go with it.
Also, FWIW, the next chapter is easily the most painful thing I've ever written.
Very hot story. And very nice on plot too. It takes a LOT to make me give an absolute half of a damn about an OC character, and you've done it wonderfully. Very well done.
well... that was intense. I thought intercourse helped relieve tension. HA HA, but no seriously this is a tragic tale of a guy unsure of what to do or how to go about living, being pushed into a corner with limited options and having to cope the best he can with an uncomfortable situation that seems to be the only option available to him or at least an option that is actually working. But hey, got to bang a chick... that's a perk.
I'm more into the stallion-on-stallion action but take it as a compliment that you've developed a character with such an engaging personality that I still read over the entirety of the hetero scene because I wanted to see what happened.
Although now that it's turning dark - well, I hope Dust comes out of this okay.
Chapters in a day is an exception, not a rule. Especially as my standard rule is that I never release a chapter until I have the next done and being edited. When inspiration comes, though, you just sorta go with it.
Also, FWIW, the next chapter is easily the most painful thing I've ever written.
Nice! Though aftermath and talking with friends pretty grim, Cherry is epic, and whole sex was cute. Sister of Berry Punch, mb?)
And why is next chapter most painful thing?
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Oh, you shall see.
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But when?
If that letter turns out to have just been a prank i will laugh herder than ever before.
that got dark and moody fast
Very hot story. And very nice on plot too. It takes a LOT to make me give an absolute half of a damn about an OC character, and you've done it wonderfully.
Very well done.
First you write m/m clop that I like, now we have straight clop And some drama?!
You are proving that my follow and favorite was well spent.
Keep it up, baby! This story's getting better and better.
Excessive comma
Dust rubber her legs as sensually as he knew how, leaning in to take a deep...
that of a stallion*
Double spaces at beginning of sentences and excessive comma. Settle down there, lover boy
Use a past tense here.
Choose one
well... that was intense. I thought intercourse helped relieve tension. HA HA, but no seriously this is a tragic tale of a guy unsure of what to do or how to go about living, being pushed into a corner with limited options and having to cope the best he can with an uncomfortable situation that seems to be the only option available to him or at least an option that is actually working. But hey, got to bang a chick... that's a perk.
Story? In clop?
It's more likely than you think.
I'm more into the stallion-on-stallion action but take it as a compliment that you've developed a character with such an engaging personality that I still read over the entirety of the hetero scene because I wanted to see what happened.
Although now that it's turning dark - well, I hope Dust comes out of this okay.
This is just making me sad man, help a homie out slime