That's a terrible idea. If you want the readers to connect with your main character, just have the character be somebody whom we can all place ourselves into. Have him do things that all of us have done it so point in our life, and related experiences all of us can relate to. You don't need to literally name him "anonymous" in order to make him an everyman character.
5423416 The reason for me making his name Anonymous is so that y'all can input your own names. Now if you really dislike the name you can always copy paste that stuff into a word document. Then press ctrl-f and replace the word anonymous with your own name, or go to random character name generator and make it generate one for you. Overall I just think that if i were to name him it would just close doors. Which technically it does no mater how minimal.
On the other hand you can check out living with lyra! A story where you can follow Aden and his adventures! Lastly thanks for the support and questions. It is key that I iron out the details and fix up my story.
5417172 Believe it or not some person searched it up. There are more people then you would think that have that name. Why their mothers named them that is a mystery in its self. If you want to know why I named the character Anonymous you can look at the reply above. Thanks for the support!
5416875 Next chapter dude, the long wait is nearly over. Thanks for the support!
5417537 I can either take that statement one of two way's. One you really hated it and you screamed because you didn't like where it was going. Or you screamed because I published the chapters. I would like to know which one, and if it is the first one what would you have done differently or where would you go from here. Thanks for the support!
5423071 Interesting I really thought that saying Sudoku instead of suicide was a popular thing, must be just where I am. As for the others I will say that thous are my mistakes. Thanks for pointing them out and for the support!
5423112 Whenever I need to find a name of a human protagonist I just go to story character name generator on Google. They actually have some really nice names and they also come with background stories as well!
5420868 Thanks for the support! I really appreciate it!
5416851 You wont believe how many city puns there are out there. I am thinking of hand drawing my own map of Equestria for this story. No promises though. Thanks for the support!
EVERYONE!
Well to be honest I wasn't expecting the rating to be like this. Nevertheless It just shows me that I still have a tone to learn about and that makes me happy! Knowing everything is boring right? So having a reality check like this does me a world of good! I already have the next chapter planed out but I would like to hear your inputs. My ears are open for any suggestions that you may have!
5434833 I meant as in I was really happy. I loved 'Falling for a Star' and i was exited when this came out. I was kinda writing around in my chair being happy.
I find it hard to believe that Anon didn't find his own way out of Tartarus. I mean, If you don't want anyone to escape, where would you place an exit? Answer: In the middle of the fucking biggest volcano ever. + when you're already dead, you can try it at least, right?
I did predict the exit as soon as the big volcano was described. I really did.
5490430 Sorry man was caught up updating Ice and Fire and reading a whole bunch of other books, and on top of all that I was working :c. Nevertheless they're no excuse as my simple answer was that i was extremely lazy these past few weeks... I will try my hardest to get the next chapter out with proper editing. (If you consider me reading it over 4 times editing.) Thanks for the support!
5457077 I really need to stay away from making things obvious. Ti's' be my weakness. Plus the mentality behind him not finding his own way is this: he was walking around the circumference not even knowing if there was an exit. When the pony came up to him he made a deal that his escape would be more or less guaranteed. Since the deal was not that bad he agreed. (Also who knows, maybe the door would of never of appeared if the pony was not present) Thanks for the support!
5452377 This is why we can't have nice things. Spelling mistakes just destroy us. :c
5452373 Glad to see that your enjoying the book/series. Your long term support is much appreciated.
5580826 To make matters worse I have the chapter already done. I'm just re-reading it to make sure its all good. Should be out tomorrow or the next day. Sorry for the wait again, its been a nice three months and I'm ready to start pumping out chapters again. Thanks for the support!
5578006 funny thing is, when I copy that into my word document it states it as an error. I have no idea why it states it as a spelling mistake, I tried everything from flushing the cache to editing the default dictionary Microsoft word comes with. Oh well looks like I will just have to be extra vigilant in the future. Thanks for the support! Will fix it right away.
5575450 That is a really good idea. Sometimes I wonder why i'm the writer and you guys are the readers. Thanks for the idea and the support!
5492778 Thanks for the support! I know that you all have been waiting for me to start writing again. Well the time has come!
Everyone!
I just want to take the time and thank everyone for reading my writing. It is your comments that drive this story and mold it into something grand! I know I have a long way to go to become a good writer, but I think with a little more determination on my part I will succeed. That being said I hope to start pumping out a chapter every week and i want you guys to start penalizing me if I don't.
Detrot...horse puns...
I'm asking you this, CC.
Where is Lorin?
I literally sat and screamed in my room for like 5 minutes when I saw this...
5417172
5419973
It's too hard to think up a name for your protagonist? That makes NO sense.
3 chapters in and I'm hooked
great story bro keep up the good work
5420605 You'd be miserably surprised.
5421815 yeah making up a name for a protagonist is hard
5423078
That's a terrible idea. If you want the readers to connect with your main character, just have the character be somebody whom we can all place ourselves into. Have him do things that all of us have done it so point in our life, and related experiences all of us can relate to. You don't need to literally name him "anonymous" in order to make him an everyman character.
5423416
The reason for me making his name Anonymous is so that y'all can input your own names. Now if you really dislike the name you can always copy paste that stuff into a word document. Then press ctrl-f and replace the word anonymous with your own name, or go to random character name generator and make it generate one for you. Overall I just think that if i were to name him it would just close doors. Which technically it does no mater how minimal.
On the other hand you can check out living with lyra! A story where you can follow Aden and his adventures! Lastly thanks for the support and questions. It is key that I iron out the details and fix up my story.
5417172
Believe it or not some person searched it up. There are more people then you would think that have that name. Why their mothers named them that is a mystery in its self. If you want to know why I named the character Anonymous you can look at the reply above. Thanks for the support!
5416875
Next chapter dude, the long wait is nearly over. Thanks for the support!
5417537
I can either take that statement one of two way's. One you really hated it and you screamed because you didn't like where it was going. Or you screamed because I published the chapters. I would like to know which one, and if it is the first one what would you have done differently or where would you go from here. Thanks for the support!
5423071
Interesting I really thought that saying Sudoku instead of suicide was a popular thing, must be just where I am. As for the others I will say that thous are my mistakes. Thanks for pointing them out and for the support!
5423112
Whenever I need to find a name of a human protagonist I just go to story character name generator on Google. They actually have some really nice names and they also come with background stories as well!
5420868
Thanks for the support! I really appreciate it!
5416851
You wont believe how many city puns there are out there. I am thinking of hand drawing my own map of Equestria for this story. No promises though. Thanks for the support!
EVERYONE!
Well to be honest I wasn't expecting the rating to be like this. Nevertheless It just shows me that I still have a tone to learn about and that makes me happy! Knowing everything is boring right? So having a reality check like this does me a world of good! I already have the next chapter planed out but I would like to hear your inputs. My ears are open for any suggestions that you may have!
5434833
I meant as in I was really happy. I loved 'Falling for a Star' and i was exited when this came out. I was kinda writing around in my chair being happy.
5434833
Writhing*
I find it hard to believe that Anon didn't find his own way out of Tartarus. I mean, If you don't want anyone to escape, where would you place an exit? Answer: In the middle of the fucking biggest volcano ever. + when you're already dead, you can try it at least, right?
I did predict the exit as soon as the big volcano was described. I really did.
Love this story BTW.
I crave ze fourth chapter. PLEASE!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!!!. But seriously where is the fourth chapter? It's been like a month?
5490430
Sorry man was caught up updating Ice and Fire and reading a whole bunch of other books, and on top of all that I was working :c. Nevertheless they're no excuse as my simple answer was that i was extremely lazy these past few weeks... I will try my hardest to get the next chapter out with proper editing. (If you consider me reading it over 4 times editing.) Thanks for the support!
5457077
I really need to stay away from making things obvious. Ti's' be my weakness. Plus the mentality behind him not finding his own way is this: he was walking around the circumference not even knowing if there was an exit. When the pony came up to him he made a deal that his escape would be more or less guaranteed. Since the deal was not that bad he agreed. (Also who knows, maybe the door would of never of appeared if the pony was not present) Thanks for the support!
5452377
This is why we can't have nice things. Spelling mistakes just destroy us. :c
5452373
Glad to see that your enjoying the book/series. Your long term support is much appreciated.
5492766 ok I understand see ya
CCPone, I love this story! I loved falling for a star. And I really miss the action. I can't wait for Chapter 4 to come out! :D
My thoughts are that rainbow dash is either; A: still on Earth. Or, B: doesn't remember anon.
Doing great though! Can't wait for chapter 4!!!
"It's been three months scence this chapter has come out and I'm dyeing for the next chapter or just dyeing good bye fimfiction"
5580826
To make matters worse I have the chapter already done. I'm just re-reading it to make sure its all good. Should be out tomorrow or the next day. Sorry for the wait again, its been a nice three months and I'm ready to start pumping out chapters again. Thanks for the support!
5578006
funny thing is, when I copy that into my word document it states it as an error. I have no idea why it states it as a spelling mistake, I tried everything from flushing the cache to editing the default dictionary Microsoft word comes with. Oh well looks like I will just have to be extra vigilant in the future. Thanks for the support! Will fix it right away.
5575450
That is a really good idea. Sometimes I wonder why i'm the writer and you guys are the readers. Thanks for the idea and the support!
5492778
Thanks for the support! I know that you all have been waiting for me to start writing again. Well the time has come!
Everyone!
I just want to take the time and thank everyone for reading my writing. It is your comments that drive this story and mold it into something grand! I know I have a long way to go to become a good writer, but I think with a little more determination on my part I will succeed. That being said I hope to start pumping out a chapter every week and i want you guys to start penalizing me if I don't.
Awwwwww HAYEL YEA!!!!!!