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Detrot...horse puns...
I'm asking you this, CC.
Where is Lorin?
Who names their child "anonymous"? That doesn't make a lot of sense.
I literally sat and screamed in my room for like 5 minutes when I saw this...
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It's too hard to think up a name for your protagonist? That makes NO sense.
3 chapters in and I'm hooked
great story bro keep up the good work
5420605 You'd be miserably surprised.
*Looks at the likes and dislikes bar*
I don't get why this story is bad, I mean sure is mistakes like:
Sudoku(a game) -I think you mean seppuku (a form of suicide in Japan)-
Breading(I don't know what it is) -I think you mean breeding-
Secrete-not spelled like that its "secret"
That's all the mistakes I've spotted but so far so good
5417172 anonymous is a name used for second person stories
Second person stories are stories that is told in your own point of view, it's hard to describe for example:
I walked down the stairs in an orderly manner (first person point of view)
You walked down the stairs in an orderly manner (second person point of view)
Bob walked down the stairs in an orderly manner (third person point of view)
If its a story in second person point of view and it says for example
"My name is anonymous!"
Just replace anonymous with your name
"My name is eclipsed!"
So yea
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Ok bye
5421815 yeah making up a name for a protagonist is hard
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That's a terrible idea. If you want the readers to connect with your main character, just have the character be somebody whom we can all place ourselves into. Have him do things that all of us have done it so point in our life, and related experiences all of us can relate to. You don't need to literally name him "anonymous" in order to make him an everyman character.
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The reason for me making his name Anonymous is so that y'all can input your own names. Now if you really dislike the name you can always copy paste that stuff into a word document. Then press ctrl-f and replace the word anonymous with your own name, or go to random character name generator and make it generate one for you. Overall I just think that if i were to name him it would just close doors. Which technically it does no mater how minimal.
On the other hand you can check out living with lyra! A story where you can follow Aden and his adventures! Lastly thanks for the support and questions. It is key that I iron out the details and fix up my story.
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Believe it or not some person searched it up. There are more people then you would think that have that name. Why their mothers named them that is a mystery in its self. If you want to know why I named the character Anonymous you can look at the reply above. Thanks for the support!
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Next chapter dude, the long wait is nearly over. Thanks for the support!
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I can either take that statement one of two way's. One you really hated it and you screamed because you didn't like where it was going. Or you screamed because I published the chapters. I would like to know which one, and if it is the first one what would you have done differently or where would you go from here. Thanks for the support!
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Interesting I really thought that saying Sudoku instead of suicide was a popular thing, must be just where I am. As for the others I will say that thous are my mistakes. Thanks for pointing them out and for the support!
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Whenever I need to find a name of a human protagonist I just go to story character name generator on Google. They actually have some really nice names and they also come with background stories as well!
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Thanks for the support! I really appreciate it!
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You wont believe how many city puns there are out there. I am thinking of hand drawing my own map of Equestria for this story. No promises though. Thanks for the support!
EVERYONE!
Well to be honest I wasn't expecting the rating to be like this. Nevertheless It just shows me that I still have a tone to learn about and that makes me happy! Knowing everything is boring right? So having a reality check like this does me a world of good! I already have the next chapter planed out but I would like to hear your inputs. My ears are open for any suggestions that you may have!
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I meant as in I was really happy. I loved 'Falling for a Star' and i was exited when this came out. I was kinda writing around in my chair being happy.
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Writhing*
I find it hard to believe that Anon didn't find his own way out of Tartarus. I mean, If you don't want anyone to escape, where would you place an exit? Answer: In the middle of the fucking biggest volcano ever. + when you're already dead, you can try it at least, right?
I did predict the exit as soon as the big volcano was described. I really did.
Love this story BTW.
I crave ze fourth chapter. PLEASE!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!!!. But seriously where is the fourth chapter? It's been like a month?
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Thanks for the support!
Sorry man was caught up updating Ice and Fire and reading a whole bunch of other books, and on top of all that I was working :c. Nevertheless they're no excuse as my simple answer was that i was extremely lazy these past few weeks... I will try my hardest to get the next chapter out with proper editing. (If you consider me reading it over 4 times editing.)
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I really need to stay away from making things obvious. Ti's' be my weakness. Plus the mentality behind him not finding his own way is this: he was walking around the circumference not even knowing if there was an exit. When the pony came up to him he made a deal that his escape would be more or less guaranteed. Since the deal was not that bad he agreed. (Also who knows, maybe the door would of never of appeared if the pony was not present) Thanks for the support!
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This is why we can't have nice things. Spelling mistakes just destroy us. :c
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Glad to see that your enjoying the book/series. Your long term support is much appreciated.
5492766 ok I understand see ya
CCPone, I love this story! I loved falling for a star. And I really miss the action. I can't wait for Chapter 4 to come out! :D
My thoughts are that rainbow dash is either; A: still on Earth. Or, B: doesn't remember anon.
Doing great though! Can't wait for chapter 4!!!
I think you mean Departure
"It's been three months scence this chapter has come out and I'm dyeing for the next chapter or just dyeing good bye fimfiction"
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To make matters worse I have the chapter already done. I'm just re-reading it to make sure its all good. Should be out tomorrow or the next day. Sorry for the wait again, its been a nice three months and I'm ready to start pumping out chapters again. Thanks for the support!
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funny thing is, when I copy that into my word document it states it as an error. I have no idea why it states it as a spelling mistake, I tried everything from flushing the cache to editing the default dictionary Microsoft word comes with. Oh well looks like I will just have to be extra vigilant in the future. Thanks for the support! Will fix it right away.
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That is a really good idea. Sometimes I wonder why i'm the writer and you guys are the readers. Thanks for the idea and the support!
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Thanks for the support! I know that you all have been waiting for me to start writing again. Well the time has come!
Everyone!
I just want to take the time and thank everyone for reading my writing. It is your comments that drive this story and mold it into something grand! I know I have a long way to go to become a good writer, but I think with a little more determination on my part I will succeed. That being said I hope to start pumping out a chapter every week and i want you guys to start penalizing me if I don't.
Awwwwww HAYEL YEA!!!!!!
I have waited so long for this! Lorin is back!
But I wanted to know more of Celestias reaction!
Aren't you forgetting something?
What?
What?
Main story, duh. We want to see Anon come back. It's been sooooo long. Also I agree with wanting to see what Celestia will do.
Yeah, that'll e awesome, I HOPE. But back to my own fics.
You better.
I hate you, you know.
I do.
We do.
... Since when do I have 2 extra commenters in my comments?
Since now.
Really? I have always been in the back of his head.
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I'm just gonna ignore that.
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I find it makes it harder to connect with a character because instead of a relatable guy with a personality I usually get either a blank figure with no emotions or a guy that makes bizarre decisions based on what the author thought was funny. That and the sheer clunkiness of the character being called "Anon" will always drag me out of the story* every time someone refers to him by name. Trying to make it so I can insert myself into that character just makes it harder for me to do so.
*The exception is Not the Hero, because in that one Anon is a character with a full personality and isn't meant for the audience to project on. He's also essentially turned the entirety of Equestria into his own masturbatory fantasy where he's the heroic seventh Element and every other bad wish fulfilment cliché you can think of. That's actually why his name is Anon. Unreformed Discord is trying to kill him to fix Equestria so he can break it himself, like in his first appearance. It's great, you should read it.
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I would like to ask all of you wonderful commenters and anyone else that see's this comment to make a discussion. One that has been asked many times and one that I have planed for a long time. Since you guys are the readers you should decide what path to take.
http://strawpoll.me/3562470
5587506 Before I vote I want to know something, If he gets a name, will all previous chapters be edited or will they all remain as Anon?
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He will stay anon in the past, but I will mold another name in the chapters to come.
5587629 To be honest I'm a bit disappointing to hear that. But I guess it is kinda a lot to ask for, maybe for every chapter in "Defying god" at least?
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Just for you man. Although I will need help picking a name for him.
5587642 I'm up for suggestions. Anything you want me to consider when I bang up a name for the man? A real one or a fantasy one? Or something more pony like? Tell me and I can give you some suggestions.
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real ones would be nice.
5587653 Kay, Here we go... wait... need a second name too or not?
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Full names would be amazing. Thanks for your support on this. I know I'm going to be doing a lot of editing when this is done.
5587667 Muahahahaha
First names: Second names;
Alex(ander) Coy
Grey Smith
Tyrone Lane
John Bridge
Tom Littledam
Arthur Hunter
Jason Martinez
Will(iam) Parker
Smith(ers) Diamond
Simon Black
Alvin Starr (not a typo)
Robin Faye
Fred Johnson
Brad King
Andrew Rodriguez
Lewis Tomlinson
Cameron Rose
Tim Clark
Adolf Kirby
Roy Kendall
Felix Levy
Dan Angel
Martin Swift
Martyn Bell
Prince Wilder
Ron Love
Hue Dragonslayer (Wtf? I looked this up and it's legit.)
Brad(igan) Carter
Ben Silva
I was about to do middle names as a bonus but using/finding/confirming real names is harder than I thought. Have fun choosing, or make another Poll.
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dat Hue Dragonslayer XD my sides.
5587768 You can blend the names any way you want. And if none are to your liking just tell me and I'll give another serving.
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I think I'm going to go with the last name Carter. As for the first name I will put up a strawpole.
5587777 Kay, FYI 2nd names are hard!
5587777 Heh, did you know there is a youtuber with the 2nd name "Littlewood"? Calls himself InTheLittleWood on youtube.
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I would think so, one that I can think of is Myles as a middle name.
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Yeah i saw this guy a while back. Never watched any of his stuff.
5587869 Yeah, BTW got that poll going for the first name yet?
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Will put it up now.
http://strawpoll.me/3564593
Will leave this up for a couple of days to see what people pick.
5588220 1 vote, and now we wait...
As promised I'm pumping out chapters like I was before. I really hope you people like reading the chapter! Also it would mean a lot to me if you guys filled out the polls. The links are on the top of the chapter and are hard to miss. It'll literally take 10 seconds out of your day. Thanks for all of your support and look forward to releasing the next chapter.
Thank you CCpone I have been waiting for this for a while now
I love the new chapter, but I can't vote on any of the polls, tells me I already voted while I haven't. But at least my choices are in the lead. Just add one extra to Changing Anon's name and that I want it to be John Carter.
Lorin my boi, time you go fuck some shit up! Challenge Anon to a 1v1, qikscop only on rust m8.