You're forced back into Equestria whether you like it or not. Sucks bro.
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I don't get why this story is bad, I mean sure is mistakes like:
Sudoku(a game) -I think you mean seppuku (a form of suicide in Japan)-
Breading(I don't know what it is) -I think you mean breeding-
Secrete-not spelled like that its "secret"
That's all the mistakes I've spotted but so far so good
So as things tend to happen the griffins made the decision to isolate themselves from the ponies. At first the ponies of Equestria were angry with their decision to leave the lands of Equestria. They called it "The Great Deparcher."
I think you mean Departure
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I don't get why this story is bad, I mean sure is mistakes like:
Sudoku(a game) -I think you mean seppuku (a form of suicide in Japan)-
Breading(I don't know what it is) -I think you mean breeding-
Secrete-not spelled like that its "secret"
That's all the mistakes I've spotted but so far so good
I think you mean Departure