Determined to embarrass Scootaloo into no longer wetting the bed, Rainbow Dash enacts a plan with the reluctant help of Twilight and Applejack. Unfortunately for Dash, things don't go quite as she intends.
“Well,” she said as she cracked a new roll of bits, “they didn’t have to be so secretive. It’s not like they’re the only mommy/filly couple that comes in here.”
4814670 Of all the ways to try to encourage a writer to work on a certain story, you decide to go on another one and slag it off? Good thinking. Effective, no doubt.
Twilight recognized it as the same one that Applejack gave her when she insisted pegasi crop-dusting was completely safe and wouldn’t harm the apples.
This should probably be "pegasus crop dusting." Also, the pronouns are a bit confusing; for a moment I thought that Applejack was the one advocating crop dusting.
This story is very good so far. All of the characters are in-character and though the premise is cliche for a padded pony story, I'm still looking forward to seeing where this is going. I really like stories where the fillies are treated like foals, so this is right up my alley!
So, I came back to re-read this because it has been months since the last update and I got confused... I realised that this is much funnier than I remember it being but also a little crazier. I'm quite enjoying the re-read, it is not something I normally do so I am shocked my ADHD didn't drive me mental. Anyway, this has been fun and I cannot wait to see the progression past chapter 2 (at the time of writing this I only read the first few paragraphs before realising I was confused on the plot.)
Nice! Looking forward to future stories.
Sounds interesting. I will keep an aye on it.
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I like how it is so far, can't wait to see the progression
ohh this seems interesting
Tyrant, you and Vector are awesome!
are all the part going to be this long?
Rainbow Dash, you have no idea what you've gotten yourself into. Prepare to be humilated.
I like how clop and adult ponies wearing diapers for sexual pleasure apparently aren't related at all.
I wish you'd update Itsy Blitzy instead of writing this dreck. ;_; I need my beautiful gay hoers porn.
I forsee Scootaloo not having to follow any of the rules while Dash gets foalified.
4814672 I think it's safe to say
I like where this is going
Moar plz
Rainbows going to pee herself.
4815836 Yeah. You think she'd learn her lesson after what happened last time.
4814670
Of all the ways to try to encourage a writer to work on a certain story, you decide to go on another one and slag it off? Good thinking. Effective, no doubt.
4815897 What happened last time?
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Also, the story I like just updated.
No but seriously that was actually rude of me to post and @the author, I'd like to apologize for being a cunt.
4815972 Didn't you read the story? She got drunk and wet the bed.
4816243 Ohhhhh... Kinda missed that part.
This should probably be "pegasus crop dusting." Also, the pronouns are a bit confusing; for a moment I thought that Applejack was the one advocating crop dusting.
can't wait for more hopefully Scoots will be treated like a foal soon
4819794 Considering everything that's been forshadowed, I don't see that happening.
MOARRRRR
“Because I thought of it,” BEST ANSWER EVER
muahaha, I like Applejack's thinking... Easy to see where this is going.
UPDATE NOW!!!!
4840931 Indeed. Rainbow Dash fell for it hook, line, and sinker.
That Indiana jones reference tho
Cuz the book and they both... Dad's mail the..
Okay I'll shut up
So, I'm liking this already. It's straightforward, fluffy, and also a role reversal fic. I like role reversal fics.
You two have my full attention on this one.
MOAR!!! MOAR!!! MOAR!!!
I cant wait till the next chapter
4957125 I meant one. Sorry, typo.
Rainbowsitting
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4989133 Because we have other things in our lives, and repeatedly asking us to update doesn't actually change that?
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This story is very good so far. All of the characters are in-character and though the premise is cliche for a padded pony story, I'm still looking forward to seeing where this is going. I really like stories where the fillies are treated like foals, so this is right up my alley!
So, I came back to re-read this because it has been months since the last update and I got confused... I realised that this is much funnier than I remember it being but also a little crazier. I'm quite enjoying the re-read, it is not something I normally do so I am shocked my ADHD didn't drive me mental. Anyway, this has been fun and I cannot wait to see the progression past chapter 2 (at the time of writing this I only read the first few paragraphs before realising I was confused on the plot.)
good first chapter/day doesn't really matter to me