19 year old Brandon must save Equestria.
You know...I've read stories that have been damn good. Amazing even.
They had nearly an equal amount of dislikes and likes mind you, and barely any favorites.
Wanna know why?
Because to sell a story you need to have a good, detailed description. Not a lazy, half arsed one like we have here.
From one writer to another, I'd seriously advise you work on that description if you want this story to blow up a little.
4809475 I've read a few of your stories and they have a damn good description and they are damn good. I have three stories myself, two complete stories and one that I'm working on my third story.
You know...I've read stories that have been damn good. Amazing even.
They had nearly an equal amount of dislikes and likes mind you, and barely any favorites.
Wanna know why?
Because to sell a story you need to have a good, detailed description. Not a lazy, half arsed one like we have here.
From one writer to another, I'd seriously advise you work on that description if you want this story to blow up a little.
4809475 I've read a few of your stories and they have a damn good description and they are damn good. I have three stories myself, two complete stories and one that I'm working on my third story.