Man, it would suck to be in Tinman's place. Yes, he's a jackass, but that was low on Winston's part. I'm surprised Tinman didn't call him out of going through something like that.
I liked the battle at the beginning. Nice actiony bit.
Also.....FIRST! With all it's glory and honor! Sorry, I wanted to see what kick people get out of that.
546577 Thank you for your comments gentlereader. Tinman got what he deserved, he's been riding the A.I. nonstop. So the A.I. had his little joke at his expense. Tinman's not too worried about his secret being revealed though, the code of the robots means bots before babes.
So you don't think I went overboard with the violence, I was worried it might be off putting. I added it mainly cause some of the readers were expressing a displeasure with the lack of explodey robot action. What parts of the battle did you care for the most?
546594 I'd be more disturbed if a battlemech sized war machine stomped through a fortress, killing everything in it's path and having no description. Doing that would divorce the reader from the atrocities of killing and that's never a good thing. I mean the level of description was fine. I like knowing what's going on, what events are happening and how characters are making it happen. I was curious how Tinman would breach the shield. The answer? Use more guns....on the generators. I really liked you having the Mormons react to this weird new war machine and I like that Tinman is very much a combat pragmatist.
I really liked how Mr. X's (Can't remember his real name off the top of my head) answer was too send even more HWSs after Tinman. I know their best chance would be to rush him all at once and crush him underneath superior numbers and force, but I'd kinda like to se if the HLF will send one or two of them at a time to deal with him. Still don't get how this is benefiting Mr. X. Land Behemoth Mark V is a massive investment.....send even more HWSs after it to blow it up.....why?!
546637 That's because he was only under contract. He was originally manufactured by Halliburton, but owned himself. The corporate bigwigs just don't want free doing what ever he wants. Tinman could probably take down what's left of the corporate run governments since they all pretty much disarmed for the end of the world.
The HWS in question are all significantly weaker then Tinman, but each has their own strengths. I was sort of planning on doing what you suggested ala the monster of the week, or chapter in this case.
Currently the HWS in order of appearance are: Fujin, from Japan. The stereotypical magic school girl/assassin Raijin, Fujin's twin brother also from Japan. The gundam mech. Boris, from the Russian Federation. The massive tank. Jackaroo, from Australia. The frisky wolf mech. Lydia, formerly from America now an asset of the E.U. The stealth fighter/bomber.
546680 Ah I like that idea. And they will be appearing in the order you have listed? I wonder how well the relatively human-sized Fujin will fair. More importantly how will the ponies react to this, not to mention what parts they'll play.
546718 No, I haven't decided how to have them fight most likely will be in teams. Since Tinman is so much stronger then them. Just as a treat for you these aren't the only HWS that Tinman will be facing off against. The ultimate battle of giant killer robots will be between Tinman and <redacted>. Deciding the fate of both of them.
The ponies have no idea the shit storm that is about to be unleashed. The fate of Phoenix hangs in the balance.
Regarding the ponies and the part they play, maybe the masked ponytar will make an appearance or two!
546746 Tinman's opponent for the final battle wouldn't happen to be Lao Chi, would it? After all he was the second best HWS, I could see Mr. X bending over backwards to get Lao Chi's braincase in his hands and into a new frame. Perhaps a Land Behemoth Mark VI weapons platform? I know, I know, Mk V was the biggest and the best, but hey you know how it works with giant robot battles and prototypes. Not too mention Tinman wanted to go down fighting him. Maybe he'll do so but get the extra will to live via Sugar Pie bringing much needed pep-talk.
As for the Masked Ponytar, since it has pony characteristics maybe it can have a pony name......how's Red Comet?
Lao Chi is being decommissioned by the PLA of the Chinese Authority. Maybe if someone decided to hijack his freighter he could show up otherwise, he gonna be sent to the big scrap heap in the sky.
PLA would have to repair him to be combat ready. But maybe if Tinman is badly damaged near the end you never know. I better stop talking about this or I'll reveal the entire plot before the story is even half done.
546862 Ah. Just knowing the story isn't even half done is interesting information, not too mention good news since this is quickly becoming a real favorite of mine.
546892 Who and the what now? I've seen the title but I can't remember the story off the top of my head...then again it's really early so that may be what's wrong.
546941 Can't say I've read into it. Mainly due to being pretty busy with finals and a new collaborative work, the first chapter of which I am currently procrastinating working on.
546971 Thank you gentlereader for your comments. Pray tell what specifically you like the most about the story? The siege of Fort Ricks, Sugar Pie and her insane quest to swap memories with Tinman, or the appearance of the five new HWS challengers?
A few things I'd like to ask about the battle sequence: Firstly, you say that tinman fires "hundreds" of shots through the course of the battle. Where does he keep his ammo, and more importantly, how does he manage to carry so much of it? What happens when he needs to re-load? Would that require him to go back to base for his engineer/s to replenish his ammo? If it does, that could be a potential drawback to his design.
Secondly, how many wepons does he actualy have? In other words, what's his wepon loadout? Is it a fixed loadout, or can it be customised according to the misson at hand?
Sorry for the mass of questions, but you've got me curious now.
something tells me that operation friendship wont end very well for one of the party participating. same with this new upcoming attack on Tinman. also, there were a few points that could have used commas during the first part of the chapter, just for a heads up.
547629 Thank you for your comments gentlereader. At over thirty feet tall and 75 feet wide, Tinman has plenty of room for his munitions. For example his primary anti personnel weapon would be his rail guns which basically means he's firing tungsten or depleted uranium rounds, with no explosive component like bullets we use to today. For the rail guns he has a hopper design that uses gravity to allow only one round at a time into his ammo feeder. For things like his gas grenades, flash bangs, and mortars he uses cylinder clip that's reloaded by his internal mechanics, (basically he has manipulators inside him that helps prevent jamming and with the reloading if anything should go wrong), but for the most part it's all gravity fed. Depending on his mission parameters if he ever runs out of ammunition he has several options, he can switch to melee using his legs and battering ram, radio back to his command center for an ammo drop, or return to base. If he gets an ammo drop, Tinman would manipulate the cylinder design and sit on top of it while his internal mechanisms pull it up inside him. Pretty much everything except battlefield maintenance on HWS is automated.
Regarding his weapons loadout, at this time he only a Mark I. So the only options he had available to choose from were shoulder mounted weapons which he didn't use this time due to the Mormons having no air support. The Mark I Land Behemoths were mostly used as anti personnel and anti-land vehicle weapons systems. Later versions, especially the Mark IV and Mark V became the jack of all weapons systems and master of all, as seen in chapter 1 The Pink Slip. As a Mark V Land Behemoth, Tinman's weapons were restricted by his battle protocols and what the client was willing to pay for plus any corporate sponsorships he managed to get (like the CHICOM IWS Metal Storm from chapter 1).
Chapter 4's battle was against his battle protocols, Tinman should have been supported by at least 3000 men, for an assault against that many. Tinman only succeed because he used superior tactics and wasn't facing a PMC with the latest and greatest military tech or another HWS.
Chapter 1's battle, was a little different, originally the battle protocols were supposed to be between Tinman and Lao Chi, the Africans kind of cheated using a 1000 men to ambush him.
I hope that answers your questions for you, if you have more please post them and I'll do my best to give a satisfactory response. Once again thanks for reading gentlereader. Until next time.
548093 Thank you for your comments gentlereader. What makes you think that operation friendship, will go badly for someone? Personally given Tinman's behavior I think he'll probably grudgingly accept it after a lot of pleading on Sugar Pie's part, but secretly be glad for it. regarding the upcoming attack I would have to agree, there's bound to be lots of mayhem in the future. Thanks for the point about the commas, I'll look into fixing that. Until next time.
548123 well, it was for two reasons. no, three actually. 1. i didn't think that Sugar Pie was going to ask Tinman about it 2. i also suspect that she wont really like his memories 3. she is making it into a pseudo- military plan, and it is well known that military plans never survive the battlefield entirely intact
anytime, i tend to notice these things because i do some editing work on the side.
548143 Ah I understand now what you meant gentlereader, and point three especially will be true. regarding point two, Sugar Pie has been studying Tinman and isn't ignorant of what he's done. She doing this more to help him that to experience his memories, but if she has to know the bitter to let Tinman taste the sweet, she's willing to do that. Regarding point one, Sugar Pie's decision to use a ponytar to acclimate him to her is actually a really good idea. With the ponytar being less pony and more artificial, Tinman would probably stop seeing her less as a pony and more like himself, thus more open to the idea of sharing memories.
It's fairly clear why the other HWSs want to take out Tinman. He's handed their asses to them on multiple occassions, and they have grudges to settle. Now, the how, that's going to be quite a sight to see...
The massacre of Fort Ricks was devastating in every sense of the word. You could see something die inside that massive chassis as Tinman pondered the angel...
And poor, poor Winston. I've never really considered how Equestrians would appear to a fundamentally and irrevocably logical frame of mind before now. It's a miracle that the poor fellow hasn't defragmented himself.
Fantastic stuff. I look forward to the impact of fecal matter and rotary cooling device.
550173 Thank you for your comments gentlereader. Yes the other HWS's so have scores they want to settle. However they each have special reasons for hating Tinman, especially Lydia.
I'm glad I was able to convey the emotional weight the Tinman felt over his actions, but a jobs a job after all. I plan on revisiting his past actions in future chapters. Captain Grymes will play a part as an important secondary character.
Regarding Winston, I wanted to convey how odd the situation must be for a program designed to only really comprehend our universe. I thought an A.I. would consider Equestria and ponies something akin to going mad.
I hope to provide more thrill, chills, and banana peels in future chapters. Thanks again for reading. Until next time.
The battle scene was utterly awesome, and, frankly, also hilarious. I enjoyed it completely. The juxtaposition of the song with the violence, plus the understanding that Tinman himself was Mormon was utterly delicious. When I read, what I read becomes a full featured motion picture in my mind, and if you could only have seen what I saw, you would be twice as proud. And you should be proud.
580627 Thank you for your kind words as always Lady Chatoyance. I was worried that maybe you didn't enjoy my latest chapter when I didn't see any of your comments. Knowing that you enjoyed it makes me happy. You will also be pleased to know that I'm half done with chapter five, which should be posted sometime later today or on Sunday. I was curious whether you would enjoy the battle scene or not. I was aiming to show that the Mormons were futilely struggling to stop the NAU, and placing their faith that god would protect them. I wanted to show their their devotion to their beliefs as realistically as I could. Too often people will write the religious as one dimensional characters. I hope I was able to convey the depths of the convictions to their beliefs in the face of certain destruction.
Regarding the rest of the chapter, how did you like the introduction of the whole ponytar subplot, and trying to figure out how to merge ponies with human technology? I hope to explore the wonder that some ponies (i.e. Sugar Pie) might hold for human technology in upcoming chapters.
With the introduction of Mr. X and his 'gift' of Fujin, Raijin , Boris, Jackaroo, and Lydia to the Phoenix chapter of the HLF, I'm sure we'll see some interesting interactions. I really look forward to seeing why exactly they have such a grudge against Tinman.
Once again thank you for reading. Until next time.
Discovered this fic today and read through all four chapters. There is so much HK-47 in Tinman that each single sentence dealing with the brain-in-a-jar is a pleasure to read beyond compare. Eagerly waiting on your upcoming chapters!
610991 Thank you for you kind comments gentlereader. As of now I have completed writing chapter 5 and at over 12k words it's going to be a real doozey. It's a real pain in the ass to format these things, all the bolding etc I have been doing makes the editing process an ardous venture. Gentlereader, in the mean time while you wait for the next chapter which should hit the presses within an hour perhaps you woudl enjoy my other story The Great Slave King . Which is nearing completion. Hopefully you'll find that little adventure as fun as The Conversion Bureau: The Reluctant Cyborg. Until next time gentlereader!
Oh god, 12k words. Someone shoot me and put me out of my misery.
611027 I aprove of these titanic chapters exceding 10k words. Whenever I'm reading a story I like, I always fear scrolling down as it brings me ever closer to the end of a chapter. There is only so much you can savor of each bite before the plate runs empty. Will definitely check back in an hour or two and see if your next chapter is up. I'll dive into it with uncontrolled passion. I'll take a look on your other fanfic. Hopefully the setting and characterization is equally interesting!
611051 I shall endeavor to meet your expectations gentlereader. Funny your user ID is how I feel. Be warned that The Great Slave King contains a human in Equestria, but he is not the focus if the story rather the rest of the pantheon and Clover and his fellowship of friends. I hope you find my other work to be to your liking as well. Until next time!
Man, it would suck to be in Tinman's place. Yes, he's a jackass, but that was low on Winston's part. I'm surprised Tinman didn't call him out of going through something like that.
I liked the battle at the beginning. Nice actiony bit.
Also.....FIRST! With all it's glory and honor! Sorry, I wanted to see what kick people get out of that.
546577 Thank you for your comments gentlereader. Tinman got what he deserved, he's been riding the A.I. nonstop. So the A.I. had his little joke at his expense. Tinman's not too worried about his secret being revealed though, the code of the robots means bots before babes.
So you don't think I went overboard with the violence, I was worried it might be off putting. I added it mainly cause some of the readers were expressing a displeasure with the lack of explodey robot action. What parts of the battle did you care for the most?
546594 I'd be more disturbed if a battlemech sized war machine stomped through a fortress, killing everything in it's path and having no description. Doing that would divorce the reader from the atrocities of killing and that's never a good thing. I mean the level of description was fine. I like knowing what's going on, what events are happening and how characters are making it happen. I was curious how Tinman would breach the shield. The answer? Use more guns....on the generators. I really liked you having the Mormons react to this weird new war machine and I like that Tinman is very much a combat pragmatist.
I really liked how Mr. X's (Can't remember his real name off the top of my head) answer was too send even more HWSs after Tinman. I know their best chance would be to rush him all at once and crush him underneath superior numbers and force, but I'd kinda like to se if the HLF will send one or two of them at a time to deal with him. Still don't get how this is benefiting Mr. X. Land Behemoth Mark V is a massive investment.....send even more HWSs after it to blow it up.....why?!
546637 That's because he was only under contract. He was originally manufactured by Halliburton, but owned himself. The corporate bigwigs just don't want free doing what ever he wants. Tinman could probably take down what's left of the corporate run governments since they all pretty much disarmed for the end of the world.
The HWS in question are all significantly weaker then Tinman, but each has their own strengths. I was sort of planning on doing what you suggested ala the monster of the week, or chapter in this case.
Currently the HWS in order of appearance are:
Fujin, from Japan. The stereotypical magic school girl/assassin
Raijin, Fujin's twin brother also from Japan. The gundam mech.
Boris, from the Russian Federation. The massive tank.
Jackaroo, from Australia. The frisky wolf mech.
Lydia, formerly from America now an asset of the E.U. The stealth fighter/bomber.
When they combine they form Devastator!
Merge for the kill!
546680 Ah I like that idea. And they will be appearing in the order you have listed? I wonder how well the relatively human-sized Fujin will fair. More importantly how will the ponies react to this, not to mention what parts they'll play.
546718 No, I haven't decided how to have them fight most likely will be in teams. Since Tinman is so much stronger then them. Just as a treat for you these aren't the only HWS that Tinman will be facing off against. The ultimate battle of giant killer robots will be between Tinman and <redacted>. Deciding the fate of both of them.
The ponies have no idea the shit storm that is about to be unleashed. The fate of Phoenix hangs in the balance.
Regarding the ponies and the part they play, maybe the masked ponytar will make an appearance or two!
546746 Tinman's opponent for the final battle wouldn't happen to be Lao Chi, would it? After all he was the second best HWS, I could see Mr. X bending over backwards to get Lao Chi's braincase in his hands and into a new frame. Perhaps a Land Behemoth Mark VI weapons platform? I know, I know, Mk V was the biggest and the best, but hey you know how it works with giant robot battles and prototypes. Not too mention Tinman wanted to go down fighting him. Maybe he'll do so but get the extra will to live via Sugar Pie bringing much needed pep-talk.
As for the Masked Ponytar, since it has pony characteristics maybe it can have a pony name......how's Red Comet?
Lao Chi is being decommissioned by the PLA of the Chinese Authority. Maybe if someone decided to hijack his freighter he could show up otherwise, he gonna be sent to the big scrap heap in the sky.
546811 Would they decommission him if someone offered a reasonable amount of money for his expertise?
PLA would have to repair him to be combat ready. But maybe if Tinman is badly damaged near the end you never know. I better stop talking about this or I'll reveal the entire plot before the story is even half done.
546862 Ah. Just knowing the story isn't even half done is interesting information, not too mention good news since this is quickly becoming a real favorite of mine.
546890 more then the Slave King book of Earth?
546892 Who and the what now? I've seen the title but I can't remember the story off the top of my head...then again it's really early so that may be what's wrong.
546936 The Great Slave King my other fic that's nearly completion
546941 Can't say I've read into it. Mainly due to being pretty busy with finals and a new collaborative work, the first chapter of which I am currently procrastinating working on.
546951 Ah thought that you had since you had commented on it previously.
546577 o.o The Dread Father possesses the first. ALL HAIL SITHIS! ALL HAIL THE VOID!
And to the Author: Love the story, keep up the good work!
546971 Thank you gentlereader for your comments. Pray tell what specifically you like the most about the story? The siege of Fort Ricks, Sugar Pie and her insane quest to swap memories with Tinman, or the appearance of the five new HWS challengers?
A few things I'd like to ask about the battle sequence:
Firstly, you say that tinman fires "hundreds" of shots through the course of the battle. Where does he keep his ammo, and more importantly, how does he manage to carry so much of it? What happens when he needs to re-load? Would that require him to go back to base for his engineer/s to replenish his ammo? If it does, that could be a potential drawback to his design.
Secondly, how many wepons does he actualy have? In other words, what's his wepon loadout? Is it a fixed loadout, or can it be customised according to the misson at hand?
Sorry for the mass of questions, but you've got me curious now.
something tells me that operation friendship wont end very well for one of the party participating. same with this new upcoming attack on Tinman.
also, there were a few points that could have used commas during the first part of the chapter, just for a heads up.
547629 Thank you for your comments gentlereader. At over thirty feet tall and 75 feet wide, Tinman has plenty of room for his munitions. For example his primary anti personnel weapon would be his rail guns which basically means he's firing tungsten or depleted uranium rounds, with no explosive component like bullets we use to today. For the rail guns he has a hopper design that uses gravity to allow only one round at a time into his ammo feeder. For things like his gas grenades, flash bangs, and mortars he uses cylinder clip that's reloaded by his internal mechanics, (basically he has manipulators inside him that helps prevent jamming and with the reloading if anything should go wrong), but for the most part it's all gravity fed. Depending on his mission parameters if he ever runs out of ammunition he has several options, he can switch to melee using his legs and battering ram, radio back to his command center for an ammo drop, or return to base. If he gets an ammo drop, Tinman would manipulate the cylinder design and sit on top of it while his internal mechanisms pull it up inside him. Pretty much everything except battlefield maintenance on HWS is automated.
Regarding his weapons loadout, at this time he only a Mark I. So the only options he had available to choose from were shoulder mounted weapons which he didn't use this time due to the Mormons having no air support. The Mark I Land Behemoths were mostly used as anti personnel and anti-land vehicle weapons systems. Later versions, especially the Mark IV and Mark V became the jack of all weapons systems and master of all, as seen in chapter 1 The Pink Slip. As a Mark V Land Behemoth, Tinman's weapons were restricted by his battle protocols and what the client was willing to pay for plus any corporate sponsorships he managed to get (like the CHICOM IWS Metal Storm from chapter 1).
Chapter 4's battle was against his battle protocols, Tinman should have been supported by at least 3000 men, for an assault against that many. Tinman only succeed because he used superior tactics and wasn't facing a PMC with the latest and greatest military tech or another HWS.
Chapter 1's battle, was a little different, originally the battle protocols were supposed to be between Tinman and Lao Chi, the Africans kind of cheated using a 1000 men to ambush him.
I hope that answers your questions for you, if you have more please post them and I'll do my best to give a satisfactory response. Once again thanks for reading gentlereader. Until next time.
548093 Thank you for your comments gentlereader. What makes you think that operation friendship, will go badly for someone? Personally given Tinman's behavior I think he'll probably grudgingly accept it after a lot of pleading on Sugar Pie's part, but secretly be glad for it. regarding the upcoming attack I would have to agree, there's bound to be lots of mayhem in the future. Thanks for the point about the commas, I'll look into fixing that. Until next time.
548123
well, it was for two reasons. no, three actually.
1. i didn't think that Sugar Pie was going to ask Tinman about it
2. i also suspect that she wont really like his memories
3. she is making it into a pseudo- military plan, and it is well known that military plans never survive the battlefield entirely intact
anytime, i tend to notice these things because i do some editing work on the side.
548143 Ah I understand now what you meant gentlereader, and point three especially will be true. regarding point two, Sugar Pie has been studying Tinman and isn't ignorant of what he's done. She doing this more to help him that to experience his memories, but if she has to know the bitter to let Tinman taste the sweet, she's willing to do that. Regarding point one, Sugar Pie's decision to use a ponytar to acclimate him to her is actually a really good idea. With the ponytar being less pony and more artificial, Tinman would probably stop seeing her less as a pony and more like himself, thus more open to the idea of sharing memories.
548163
very true, that is a good point. it seems that i will have to wait and see this unfold.
It's fairly clear why the other HWSs want to take out Tinman. He's handed their asses to them on multiple occassions, and they have grudges to settle. Now, the how, that's going to be quite a sight to see...
The massacre of Fort Ricks was devastating in every sense of the word. You could see something die inside that massive chassis as Tinman pondered the angel...
And poor, poor Winston. I've never really considered how Equestrians would appear to a fundamentally and irrevocably logical frame of mind before now. It's a miracle that the poor fellow hasn't defragmented himself.
Fantastic stuff. I look forward to the impact of fecal matter and rotary cooling device.
550173 Thank you for your comments gentlereader. Yes the other HWS's so have scores they want to settle. However they each have special reasons for hating Tinman, especially Lydia.
I'm glad I was able to convey the emotional weight the Tinman felt over his actions, but a jobs a job after all. I plan on revisiting his past actions in future chapters. Captain Grymes will play a part as an important secondary character.
Regarding Winston, I wanted to convey how odd the situation must be for a program designed to only really comprehend our universe. I thought an A.I. would consider Equestria and ponies something akin to going mad.
I hope to provide more thrill, chills, and banana peels in future chapters. Thanks again for reading. Until next time.
The battle scene was utterly awesome, and, frankly, also hilarious. I enjoyed it completely. The juxtaposition of the song with the violence, plus the understanding that Tinman himself was Mormon was utterly delicious. When I read, what I read becomes a full featured motion picture in my mind, and if you could only have seen what I saw, you would be twice as proud. And you should be proud.
580627 Thank you for your kind words as always Lady Chatoyance. I was worried that maybe you didn't enjoy my latest chapter when I didn't see any of your comments. Knowing that you enjoyed it makes me happy. You will also be pleased to know that I'm half done with chapter five, which should be posted sometime later today or on Sunday. I was curious whether you would enjoy the battle scene or not. I was aiming to show that the Mormons were futilely struggling to stop the NAU, and placing their faith that god would protect them. I wanted to show their their devotion to their beliefs as realistically as I could. Too often people will write the religious as one dimensional characters. I hope I was able to convey the depths of the convictions to their beliefs in the face of certain destruction.
Regarding the rest of the chapter, how did you like the introduction of the whole ponytar subplot, and trying to figure out how to merge ponies with human technology? I hope to explore the wonder that some ponies (i.e. Sugar Pie) might hold for human technology in upcoming chapters.
With the introduction of Mr. X and his 'gift' of Fujin, Raijin , Boris, Jackaroo, and Lydia to the Phoenix chapter of the HLF, I'm sure we'll see some interesting interactions. I really look forward to seeing why exactly they have such a grudge against Tinman.
Once again thank you for reading. Until next time.
Discovered this fic today and read through all four chapters. There is so much HK-47 in Tinman that each single sentence dealing with the brain-in-a-jar is a pleasure to read beyond compare. Eagerly waiting on your upcoming chapters!
610991 Thank you for you kind comments gentlereader. As of now I have completed writing chapter 5 and at over 12k words it's going to be a real doozey. It's a real pain in the ass to format these things, all the bolding etc I have been doing makes the editing process an ardous venture. Gentlereader, in the mean time while you wait for the next chapter which should hit the presses within an hour perhaps you woudl enjoy my other story The Great Slave King . Which is nearing completion. Hopefully you'll find that little adventure as fun as The Conversion Bureau: The Reluctant Cyborg. Until next time gentlereader!
Oh god, 12k words. Someone shoot me and put me out of my misery.
611027
I aprove of these titanic chapters exceding 10k words. Whenever I'm reading a story I like, I always fear scrolling down as it brings me ever closer to the end of a chapter. There is only so much you can savor of each bite before the plate runs empty. Will definitely check back in an hour or two and see if your next chapter is up. I'll dive into it with uncontrolled passion. I'll take a look on your other fanfic. Hopefully the setting and characterization is equally interesting!
611051 I shall endeavor to meet your expectations gentlereader. Funny your user ID is how I feel. Be warned that The Great Slave King contains a human in Equestria, but he is not the focus if the story rather the rest of the pantheon and Clover and his fellowship of friends. I hope you find my other work to be to your liking as well. Until next time!
Omg... The breeding session. And over 30 times.